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Old 02-17-05, 12:12 PM   #1
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am i worthy of a crew?

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boy i'll shoot first..keepin you on ya p's and q's nigga
blast through ya fake coogi like i was a q dawg nigga
"cuban" niggaz get "boxed" out..i run up in ya house
"geometry" style..my crew "triangle" ya spouse
cuz we straight up run trains wit 3 niggaz and one dame
doin tha same thang..gettin pussy and gettin brain
they call me tha "BLACK" mayne..but im "afro-american" to u dudes
different "bases" i steal..grabbin "bats" to smash ya crews
im new to some jews, but horrifyin to catholics
and im a baptis..only one "father" so its death to tha "bastards"
i master tha style of wu-tang to punch u in ya grill
and leave u to rot like "cavities"..too much "hawiian punch" in ya grill
and life is real short..cuz death is certain to yall
i mull innocent bystanders jus for standin by too long
im so far ahead of my time, my own sould gotta "ketchup"
and i'll slap tha taste out ya mouth for tryin to "mustard" up a "match up"


so, do any crews fill dis? if not its iight. LEAVE FEEDBACK. i need tha critics help.




drop a link with-in 24 hours or this will be closed... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165166
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Old 02-17-05, 12:49 PM   #2
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can i get some feedback plz
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Old 02-17-05, 12:53 PM   #3
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You aight, decent wordplay for the most part, few nice metas too.............

Wanna collab? i'm mad bored, you choose thwe topic, i'll work on the hook an i'll post a verse to you thru pm, just get at me with a topic my nigga
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Old 02-17-05, 01:02 PM   #4
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iight, cool wit me. let me think a bit
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Old 02-17-05, 02:12 PM   #5
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shit was nice 4real...i was feelin tha metaz and yo structure was iight...its cool though kid...u a newb but u cool in my book...keep up tha good work...8.5/10...~1~
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Old 02-17-05, 04:46 PM   #6
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good nice concept & i like it overall quality was official i would give it 8.5/10
also make sure 2 return the favor in my open mic
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Old 02-17-05, 07:53 PM   #7
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thanx yall. mos def appreciated
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Old 02-17-05, 08:18 PM   #8
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dis was koo

but its sum wak crews so......................
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Old 02-18-05, 08:09 AM   #9
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Old 02-18-05, 10:32 AM   #10
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^^^iight, dammit. im bout to
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Old 02-18-05, 10:34 AM   #11
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Old 02-18-05, 04:51 PM   #12
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uppin.....uppin.....uppin
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Old 02-18-05, 05:56 PM   #13
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uppin.................................
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Old 02-28-05, 08:48 PM   #14
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this was weak as fuck...how the hell you gonna diss nas...and his latest album..when you can;t even put together a decent punchline
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Old 02-28-05, 08:53 PM   #15
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yo i agree a little with everybody except for dolla (no offense Dolla, it wasn't that good) u do need ta work on your punchlines and vocab, but i see u threw in some effort ta throw in some punches and that so i'll give a 5.5/10 elevate
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