Invektive vs Showstopper
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-20-05 at 07:22 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Showstopper = SPul = Banned for cheating

Showstopper has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-20-05 06:52 PM.

You like dicks up yo ass, cuz it makes you feel cushy
Then you shove one down yo mouth, no wonder you're called pussy
I'll chop you up like Hannibal, your sucky lines they're bent
And man, I ain't "kiddin" cuz I ain't a "parent"
You're the wackest on the block, you're a stupid like kid
D/r's in all yo battles, man, it's even in yo sig
Like the Yankees last year... man, you're fuckin' rattled
Divide yo rec in half, and that's the result of this battle

Invektive has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-20-05 07:14 PM.

uppin for the win.......................................

Voted For: Invektive

i have to go with invek on this one

You like dicks up yo ass, cuz it makes you feel cushy
Then you shove one down yo mouth, no wonder you're called pussy
WEAK PUNCH HERE
I'll chop you up like Hannibal, your sucky lines they're bent
And man, I ain't "kiddin" cuz I ain't a "parent"
OK WORDPLAY BUT NO PUNCH
You're the wackest on the block, you're a stupid like kid
D/r's in all yo battles, man, it's even in yo sig
OK PUNCH/PERSONAL
Like the Yankees last year... man, you're fuckin' rattled
Divide yo rec in half, and that's the result of this battle
WEAK PUNCH

you faggot ass is similar to a shot gun..you get the "cock" then "blow"
if fans heard you they'd evacuate the building..you truly do stop the show
OK PUNCH COULD'VE BEEN WORDED BETTER
Kid thinks he's nice but we can all see right through you..call him casper
only half of the verses will be worth reading..trust me..yours is no factor
WEAK PUNCH NICE SET UP
made a call out with a threatening title ..like im supposed to be petrified
but why would i be scared?...when your skill level is lots less than mine
OK PUNCH HERE
it has been stopped...concluded...the show has truly came to an end
he doesnt "pack enough heat" to be "fire"...so he cant be "blazin" me then
PLAYED WIT THE WORDS NICE OK PUNCH

the thing with this battle was, showstopper's punches were childish here. His opener was childish, his wordplay had no punch, his personal wasn't strong, and his closer was bad.

invek's personal wasn't great but better and all his punches were better no hate to anyone

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word...thanks for the honest vote....favor will be returned......

Voted For: Invektive

Invektive-Aiight, Punches was nice original non-played out. Wordplays was good. Flowed nicly. You need multi'z. Meta'z was good.




show-Played out punches except the closer, that was creative and decent. Stop with the gay punches man, they're really played out, made your punches very much not effective,.


Overall=This battle is one-sided. Invektive, you had some decent punches. Flowed nicly. Wordplays was good. Meta'z was also good. Show, you had some played out punches, except the closer. Invektive came out un-played original. While show came out played made his punches not effective.


RTF INVEKTIVE I'LL APPRECIATED

Voted For: Invektive

Show, wasnt feeling your opener at all..
It was too basic an didnt hit man

i dont see the point of the parent line?
not very creative here man

the closer, was the best thing you had ta offer show, but still, it wasnt all that tight, especially when ya gonna battle somebody with Invektives caliber.

take more time on ya verses an try an be more creative
4/10 for your verse

Invektive:
ya opener seemed a little forced, like u had ta go an use his name against him, wasnt feeling it ta be honest homie
the casper loine was dope, an the personalafter the casper line hit hard, nce shit

I was feeling the line leading up too the skill level less than mine personals, but i wasnt feeling that personal

the closer was ....okay, i guess, i seen you key up alot better man, but u did enuff ta get my vote

Easy win in my opinnon

Peace

Voted For: Showstopper

ok let's break this down,

Invektive, flow was pretty nice and structure too. But punches didn't hit that hard at ALL. Your only good one was the closer, and that was just decent. Also, using links is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo played out now. Plus, if you use them actually make them hit hard instead of somethin' pointless like a call out thread. But other than that, I guess it was an aiight verse.

Showstopper, your verse was aiight too. First punch was pretty nice. second punch pretty ill wordplay there. I was fdeelin' that. 3rd punch was weak, nothing special. Closer was nice. Jus work on yo flow. Other than that, pretty nice stuff.

I think this was a weak battle, but show stopper easily got this. Should be easy win for him IMO.

vote/ Showstopper

pc out.

Voted For: Showstopper

decent battle here i thought showstopper took it though honestly structure was better had some good punches decent battle though good short read so yea ima have to go wit Showstopper...

never seizes to amaze me with the amount of bad votes and d/r's on this site....uppin for the win

Voted For: Showstopper

Invek

you faggot ass is similar to a shot gun..you get the "cock" then "blow"
if fans heard you they'd evacuate the building..you truly do stop the show

weak... not a punch really..

Kid thinks he's nice but we can all see right through you..call him casper
only half of the verses will be worth reading..trust me..yours is no factor

not a punch. no personal either.... ok thouh..

made a call out with a threatening title ..like im supposed to be petrified
but why would i be scared?...when your skill level is lots less than mine

wtf... no.....

it has been stopped...concluded...the show has truly came to an end
he doesnt "pack enough heat" to be "fire"...so he cant be "blazin" me then

nice I liked this..

show:

You like dicks up yo ass, cuz it makes you feel cushy
Then you shove one down yo mouth, no wonder you're called pussy

lmfao... dope...

I'll chop you up like Hannibal, your sucky lines they're bent
And man, I ain't "kiddin" cuz I ain't a "parent"

good.. nicer word play...


You're the wackest on the block, you're a stupid like kid
D/r's in all yo battles, man, it's even in yo sig

don't get it.. noo... not good...

Like the Yankees last year... man, you're fuckin' rattled
Divide yo rec in half, and that's the result of this battle

pretrty nice...


Overall, Show got this easy. Invektive had like some shit that wasn't really that good a punch. Show had some funny ass lines in there. I was feelin them. But he ended off not too good. Overall decent battle, keep elevating and droppin'. pc out

v/ SS

Voted For: Showstopper

showstopper:
You like dicks up yo ass, cuz it makes you feel cushy
Then you shove one down yo mouth, no wonder you're called pussy
blah, decent opener
I'll chop you up like Hannibal, your sucky lines they're bent
And man, I ain't "kiddin" cuz I ain't a "parent"
weak, bent and parent didn't really rhyme
You're the wackest on the block, you're a stupid like kid
D/r's in all yo battles, man, it's even in yo sig
decent attempt at a personal
Like the Yankees last year... man, you're fuckin' rattled
Divide yo rec in half, and that's the result of this battle
lol good personal, 5-0 i got that...nice closer overall

Invektive:
you faggot ass is similar to a shot gun..you get the "cock" then "blow"
if fans heard you they'd evacuate the building..you truly do stop the show
decent opener, ok play off his name
Kid thinks he's nice but we can all see right through you..call him casper
only half of the verses will be worth reading..trust me..yours is no factor
weak
made a call out with a threatening title ..like im supposed to be petrified
but why would i be scared?...when your skill level is lots less than mine
could've been worded better
it has been stopped...concluded...the show has truly came to an end
he doesnt "pack enough heat" to be "fire"...so he cant be "blazin" me then
weak closer

winner: showstopper, for a better verse even though neither of you came very hard in this one. Go elevate kids. RTF in my sig or else :shoot: