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CeleriTy vs Technical
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CeleriTy has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-24-05 08:13 PM.
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nobody'd know who ya were.. even if ya name was a disease and u can IM for votes.. but your still not AIMING to please.. u can claim u spit fire.. but dawg you can trust you wont burn me.. nothing u could do would "serve me".. cuz i aint in the mood for slurpy's claiming you older than me.. dawg your just a ..fat liar and its pretty sad.. when your own home can catch a flat tire.. :thumbup: sorry bud.. hehe |
Technical has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-24-05 08:38 PM.
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Listen Celerity..Like Celebrities That Bite..U Losin Ur Dignity..
Look Geek..You'll Never "Beat" A "Pussy"..Like Men With 'Christian Virginity'.. In RV You're An Orphan..Who Relies On "The Councils" Dick Like Poor Kids*.. Ur Rhymes Are "Hot"? Well All (B)(l)(a)(z)(e)(r)(s) Dont Win..Just Line Portland..* Learn The Law Kid..Battling Me..Is Like Extortion.. Cuz U Make Decisions Without Visions..Like Mothers Than Go Along With Abortion.. ********************************** Orphans this year had to rely on the government for more money and clothes..(the council) Portland Trailblazers don win no games for shit..lol |
^^ nice drop.. even though u had twice as long as me...
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This was feedback posted for Technical
Tech......................................whoa!
Cel........and You Asked Me For A Battle...........smh |
Voted For: CeleriTy
dude celerity obviously won dis... **nuff said** Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Technical
yo this was alright work on your punches a little more
man.....put yea pretty cool |
Voted For: CeleriTy
Aight this was a one sided battle ... shit was off... both lacked tho... tech- def. not ya best shit ..... flow was aight but structure was ass.... vocab was aight, punches didnt hit hard at all and neither did personals and that wins battles..... shit was not ya best man... u could have came harder fa real... CeleriTy- shit was aight man... structure was pretty wack tho... flow was good ... wordplay could use help... punches and personals won this for you... shit was good man... aight its obveous who won this shit... VOTE = CeleriTy |
iight thanks for the vote.. uppin some more.......
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Voted For: Technical
Good Battle Both Techinical And Celerity Came Hard And Had Decent Punches.... Openor=Tie,Both Openors Wass Hot Personals=Tech,Had More Personals Structure=Cel,Easier Ta Read Didnt Stretch Like Tech's Verse Punches=Tech,Had More Creative And Decent Punches Vocab=None Closer=Cel,Shit Wass Hott Came Mad Hard Close Ass Battle,But Tech Pulled It Off Bcus Of His Personals His Personals Took Thiss Battle Fa Him They Wass Directed Ta Him And They Landed......... Decent Battle Yalll.......... /V Technical............... |
Tha Fucc!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why Mih Text Color Red
Make That Shit DeepSkyBlue Strobe................. |
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Voted For: CeleriTy
flow- celerity, was structured betta, which made it flow betta punches- both of y'all punches were good, but i felt that celerity had more & dey hit harder personals- technical, had alot more, & were alot betta celerity urs were nice 2 but u didn't have many multies- both of y'all had some thru out this battle...so in this category i have 2 say it'z a tie vocab- both were on point in this, & it'z anotha tie originality- both of y'all lines were good, & overall 1 dope ass battle from both V/ celerity make sure 2 return the favor |
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