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Technical 2 28.57%
CeleriTy 5 71.43%
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Old 02-24-05, 08:12 PM   #1
CeleriTy
*Im'a Hustla*
 
From: Portland
CeleriTy vs Technical

IP: E1D7 D0FC

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Old 02-24-05, 08:13 PM   #2
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Old 02-24-05, 08:16 PM   #3
CeleriTy
*Im'a Hustla*
 
From: Portland
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nobody'd know who ya were.. even if ya name was a disease
and u can IM for votes.. but your still not AIMING to please..
u can claim u spit fire.. but dawg you can trust you wont burn me..
nothing u could do would "serve me".. cuz i aint in the mood for slurpy's
claiming you older than me.. dawg your just a ..fat liar
and its pretty sad.. when your own home can catch a flat tire..


sorry bud.. hehe
 
Old 02-24-05, 08:38 PM   #4
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Old 02-24-05, 08:51 PM   #5
Technical
23-7, 16 Knockouts
 
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Listen Celerity..Like Celebrities That Bite..U Losin Ur Dignity..
Look Geek..You'll Never "Beat" A "Pussy"..Like Men With 'Christian Virginity'..
In RV You're An Orphan..Who Relies On "The Councils" Dick Like Poor Kids*..
Ur Rhymes Are "Hot"? Well All (B)(l)(a)(z)(e)(r)(s) Dont Win..Just Line Portland..*
Learn The Law Kid..Battling Me..Is Like Extortion..
Cuz U Make Decisions Without Visions..Like Mothers Than Go Along With Abortion
..


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Orphans this year had to rely on the government for more money and clothes..(the council)
Portland Trailblazers don win no games for shit..lol
 
Old 02-24-05, 08:55 PM   #6
CeleriTy
*Im'a Hustla*
 
From: Portland
IP: E1D7 D0FC

^^ nice drop.. even though u had twice as long as me...
 
Old 02-24-05, 09:11 PM   #7
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Tech......................................whoa!


Cel........and You Asked Me For A Battle...........smh
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Old 02-24-05, 09:12 PM   #8
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Voted For: CeleriTy

dude celerity obviously won dis...
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Old 02-24-05, 09:14 PM   #9
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yo this was alright work on your punches a little more
man.....put yea pretty cool
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Old 02-24-05, 09:14 PM   #10
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Voted For: CeleriTy

Aight this was a one sided battle ... shit was off... both lacked tho...

tech- def. not ya best shit ..... flow was aight but structure was ass.... vocab was aight, punches didnt hit hard at all and neither did personals and that wins battles..... shit was not ya best man... u could have came harder fa real...

CeleriTy- shit was aight man... structure was pretty wack tho... flow was good ... wordplay could use help... punches and personals won this for you... shit was good man...

aight its obveous who won this shit...

VOTE = CeleriTy
 
Old 02-24-05, 09:22 PM   #11
CeleriTy
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From: Portland
IP: E1D7 D0FC

iight thanks for the vote.. uppin some more.......
 
Old 02-25-05, 10:42 AM   #12
Kordozar
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Voted For: Technical

Good Battle Both Techinical And Celerity Came Hard And Had Decent Punches....

Openor=Tie,Both Openors Wass Hot
Personals=Tech,Had More Personals
Structure=Cel,Easier Ta Read Didnt Stretch Like Tech's Verse
Punches=Tech,Had More Creative And Decent Punches
Vocab=None
Closer=Cel,Shit Wass Hott Came Mad Hard

Close Ass Battle,But Tech Pulled It Off Bcus Of His Personals His Personals Took Thiss Battle Fa Him
They Wass Directed Ta Him And They Landed.........

Decent Battle Yalll..........

/V Technical...............
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Old 02-25-05, 10:43 AM   #13
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Tha Fucc!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why Mih Text Color Red

Make That Shit DeepSkyBlue Strobe.................
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Old 02-25-05, 10:51 AM   #14
Technical
23-7, 16 Knockouts
 
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Coo...Uppin For More Votes........................
 
Old 02-25-05, 11:03 AM   #15
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Voted For: CeleriTy

flow- celerity, was structured betta, which made it flow
betta
punches- both of y'all punches were good, but i felt that
celerity had more & dey hit harder
personals- technical, had alot more, & were alot betta
celerity urs were nice 2 but u didn't have
many
multies- both of y'all had some thru out this battle...so in
this category i have 2 say it'z a tie
vocab- both were on point in this, & it'z anotha tie
originality- both of y'all lines were good, & overall 1 dope
ass battle from both
V/ celerity
make sure 2 return the favor
 
 


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