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The top song on this link, feedback has really helped so far so I hope you guys can help me get even better. I will try and listen to some of everybody elses stuff tonite. Hit me up if you get a chance-Determined three of my responses http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179645 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1989432 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1989480 |
ariight, listening.....
not feeling how you come into it... its not really you, its just the beat is boring, and ur prescence aint that great... Sounds like your very new to recording, if thats the case, then your on the right track, just keep dropping songs... the verse was kinda short- u changed up how u said that hook thing at the end, or someone else said, i dunno, it sounds more off the second time, and u shoulda faded out the beat instead of letting it just stop abruptly like that-- I think the whole thing all in all just needed more, cuz the beat was weak, sounded like it was missing something, and ur flow sounded very amateurish... keep droppin it though, no hate, just bein honest...1 |
I feel lat, I am tryin to take the criticism and learn with it, so if you have any suggestions just holla at me
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yea intro is aight ...coulda been better the chorus was great...decent verse..ya flow was kind of rocky at some points but never the less flawless..u doing ya thing..good job..
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thanks but I kno it is far from flawless, I got to get better, so be as critical as you can., thanks though
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listening...beat is dope
chorus-not feeling it at all..makin ur voice sound like a kid's annd pauses are too long needs sum adluibs n ish maybe lyrical content-good flow- on beat most of the timbe but is a lil unsteady in places and falls off overall- not too bad..mad potential....-6.5/10 Yo can you send me that beat plz - AIM=Acuity2k5 , msn = the_daddy2k4@hotmail.com |
u seem like afraid to spit, kinda hesitant
didnt feel da intro beat wasnt feeln, it was ight but too repeatative quality was pretty good, good job wif dubs u had a few good lyrics ur flow was basic, u just need work wif delivery and mic presence and the song ended instant, try to fade out or something next time 5/10 |
ok no diss, but the beat is boring. and when i hear the hook then i thought the song was gone be really good, but you didnt come out real good on it. but you fixed that up later in the verse. the transition from the end of the verse to the hook was kinda messed up. but like Seventhird said, if u new to recording then you on the right track to becomin hot
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Don't Test- this beat too simple.. (in a bad way) it come off as annoyin as hell
vocals are hella low... you sound very, i mean very distant from the mic, i like the way you said the intro, your flow was fine until you tried to sing, your lyrics are str8. you fell off in a few spaces.. this was kinda short but for what it was you need sum work.. lyrically u aight, just workin on mic presence and how u deliver.. :thumbup: |
ok kool, I will try and post another song with a better beat soon, i wish I could get more feedback then just I need to work on my mic presence, like details, but its cool, thanks a lot for all the feed back, peace
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flow's madd off on this, beat's aiight and yeah the verse was madd short..levels on ya vocals could've been up'd just a bit...just work on ya flow, that's your main problem and it' the most difficult thing for people to work on...you can work on lyrics and everything else after that but the main base of things is flow so cncentrate on that...
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Kool thanks for the feed, I didnt write the hook and in between when it says, "yall kno who we are" it is goin to say the names of the artists on the track, so if you can just ignore the chorus and help me out on the lyrics, peace
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aight well chorus ain't bad shit is mad nice you have potential for sure, but you still need to drop more and gain some better confidence when you spitting, the verse is nice, lyrics is cool but you need some more delivery homie
but overall nicelooks keep droppin] thx for droppping some feedback in my thread peace 1 |
I NEED DELIVERY< i am goin to work on that for the next drop, thanks to everybody, peace
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