re-did this track
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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

aight i wasn't feelin tho intro...lol...damn hurry up and spit...lol...

first dude- aight flow was aight...delivery was aight too...lyrics were coo...

2nd dude- aight flow was ok...lyrics were str8 had a few played lines...delivery was aight...need more confidence on the mic tho fam...

overall this joint was str8 right here...just need some polishing up


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intro is forever.......................i feel the first guys voice, but not really his delivery, he had some nice lines........................second dude, not really feeling his voice..he is on beat though.....it aint that bad though when you keep listening to it, kind of unique i guess "hilton sex tape".......................he kind of lost the beat for a sec........not a bad track though. I always like that beat though, so thats a plus, B-

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1994266

for any of u who don't know what i was talking about, i was talking about the Paris Hilton sex tape and i do have confidence on the mic, i like using a monotone voice and i record so much shit for this ny mixtape for dj s-large so i'm tired and out of energy by the time i get to some of these other tracks but i feel u fam, thanks for the feed.

this was dopeness... 20 Gs and cenario (debit) were both dope in this track... that beat was fuckin tight as hell... love the way u mixed it all togeather.. definatly feelin yalls verses on this one.. good vocab and shit too... very nice overall 9/10

good job you guys~ this beat is dope, i liked the intro samples and i was feeling the hook too,
1st~you got nice presence on the mic 20, strong delivery, good voice..
2nd~cenario, you did great on this track, you just need to spit a little louder with more confidence maybe, but you were on beat and all, lyrics were good too...
overall, with some polishing up on your mixing skills, you guys would sound better, but this was great..keep it up.1

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i mixed it all, his vocals also, it was just his mic...

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

that shit was hot, i liked how yall kept it coo wit da Punches and shit and it sounded right wit da beat. yall flow on it was hard and overall was good.

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ha ha, 20 u told me u were doin this one. the samples do sound pretty slick too. i would keep those in but take out the talking part cuz theres realy no need for that. but when the verse starts you keep a consistant flow, i know you can do better than this at some parts as to lyrical content, for example riming body with lobby, i dunno i know u got more skills than that, challenge yourself and you'll mix up those masterpeices u b droppin maaaaaaaaaaan! but yea half way thru i was realy likin ur verse better it fit the beat better n shit. the second dude came nyce with it. def brought the lyrical content, like you got a voice where you kinda can get a perspective on how u are personality wise, like i felt like i had kicked it with u and got to know u after ur verse if that makes n e sence, feel me? your doin you basicallly keep it up playboys.

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Intro was excessive, but I like the vocal samples - that was nice. First cat - mad potential, nice voice, good with flow, and came nice with lyrics. 20 - "I stay on the block like a game of tetris" lol. nice. Little Trip diss in there? lol. You got confidence, and a good flow. Wasn't feelin ya voice much as the first guy, but w/e - i aint like my voice either. Keep droppin - this the first i heard form you and its aight. 1

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i never listed the order lol
20grand - 1st
debit aka warfare - 2nd

doing another remix on dis shii wif tripple N for fun
be on the look out

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

In that case - reverse my comments and looks like you the cat with mad potential. lol. Good looks man - nice track. Holla at me if you want to colab. 1

ps - peep my last track:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179692

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