Addicted.. Pleez peep & reply
 

part 2 to absent let me know what you think

Guiding your hands so gracefully along my face we lay in the depths of our love/
Temptation screaming our names/
Giving in we share loves sweet kiss/
The taste of two souls combined producing one lingering amongst our tongues/
Our eyes gazing and grazing upon each detail that we memorize in great delight/
Hormones in the process of taking twilight’s flight/
Minds full of fantasy, bodies full of fact/
I hit the exact spot that flushes your body with a feeling of x-da-see I pull you daringly close to me we love so tenderly/
Never letting go our hearts abundant speeches moving with the flow we find ourselves addicted//

aye pleez tell da truth but don't dawg me

well... it was a good drop... with a very good choice of words... the flows a little off... but it was a deep, good drop i was digging it.. very sweet awww ~peace

thank you foe keepin it real i respect that

emotions were more than well felt my fellow poet/
i felt it could have flowed better/
but who am i to judge how u feel/
keep preaching truth/
muchluv&respect