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Addicted.. Pleez peep & reply
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part 2 to absent let me know what you think
Guiding your hands so gracefully along my face we lay in the depths of our love/ Temptation screaming our names/ Giving in we share loves sweet kiss/ The taste of two souls combined producing one lingering amongst our tongues/ Our eyes gazing and grazing upon each detail that we memorize in great delight/ Hormones in the process of taking twilight’s flight/ Minds full of fantasy, bodies full of fact/ I hit the exact spot that flushes your body with a feeling of x-da-see I pull you daringly close to me we love so tenderly/ Never letting go our hearts abundant speeches moving with the flow we find ourselves addicted// aye pleez tell da truth but don't dawg me |
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well... it was a good drop... with a very good choice of words... the flows a little off... but it was a deep, good drop i was digging it.. very sweet awww ~peace
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IP: 5153 3B92
thank you foe keepin it real i respect that
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emotions were more than well felt my fellow poet/
i felt it could have flowed better/ but who am i to judge how u feel/ keep preaching truth/ muchluv&respect
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