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DAZZLE 04-09-05 07:48 AM

DAZZLE vs M.C. Blasphemy
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No D/R
No Bullshit.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-12-05 at 07:48 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 04-09-05 01:55 PM

M.C. Blasphemy has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-09-05 01:55 PM.

M.C. Blasphemy 04-09-05 01:58 PM

since age 12 I was told white boys can't rap//
now I'm hear to cut you down to a pile of crap//
my names blashpemy cause my rhymes are a sin//
this may be my first battle but I'm destined to win//
I'm lyricaly blessed//
a man so oppressed//
a little obsessed//
bound to be best//

System 04-10-05 02:59 PM

DAZZLE has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-10-05 02:59 PM.

DAZZLE 04-11-05 06:02 PM

Almost forgot about this so keyed this quickly.


Easier to battle ya mum, she brought yo here so il use slyness~to~diss~her...
No dough no love and ya rappers money....... is a minus~figure...
I could beat you with quick keyed lines coz im just~that~sick...
Take this easy, you cant write for shit....your dys~lex~ic...
You disrespect god?, well i dont give a fuck for him so cant hate you for it...
but god jesus and this MC all have somethin in common...YOUR ALL BULLSHIT!!

weakest ive ever done but blah, what i seen of him wasnt too clever either.

His rappers money is -120, click the link and blasphemy is disrespecting god.

Ryan Hughes 04-12-05 11:06 AM

Voted For: DAZZLE

V/Dazzle.....this was a one sided battle dazzle came wit sum good punchs an personals wit good structure which gave him the win...blas...ur veerse had really no punchs or any personals real basic so work on the punchs an vocab..........No Hate....RETURN THE FAVOR.....
Opener=D
closer=d
structure=d
Punchs=d
personals=d
vocab=d
Multis=d
Overall=Dazzle

DAZZLE 04-12-05 11:10 AM

aight thanks, you got a link to rtf? .

Ryan Hughes 04-12-05 11:13 AM

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=185601
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=185828
^^^^RtF Either One......

DAZZLE 04-19-05 05:39 PM

done,

upping..................................

Verbal 04-19-05 05:51 PM

Voted For: DAZZLE

Easier to battle ya mum, she brought yo here so il use slyness~to~diss~her...
No dough no love and ya rappers money....... is a minus~figure...
OK..
I could beat you with quick keyed lines coz im just~that~sick...
Take this easy, you cant write for shit....your dys~lex~ic...
Basically duplicated what he posted...not that great..
You disrespect god?, well i dont give a fuck for him so cant hate you for it...
but god jesus and this MC all have somethin in common...YOUR ALL BULLSHIT!!
Eh....then again you really didn't have to do much to win this one..

MC Blasphemous-
That was straight-up blasphemous to the rap game. I can see mics cutting themselves off and speakers spitting feedback just to drown you out...
Work on the game.....that was bad, but I've seen worse..

Daubs 04-19-05 06:10 PM

Voted For: DAZZLE

pollls


Vote removed .

Daubs 04-19-05 06:17 PM

^i got that dq ed.

My bad .

Daubs 08-31-05 07:59 AM

brap .

AITZ 09-08-05 08:33 PM

Voted For: DAZZLE

Blasphemy
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since age 12 I was told white boys can't rap//
now I'm hear to cut you down to a pile of crap//
my names blashpemy cause my rhymes are a sin//
this may be my first battle but I'm destined to win//
I'm lyricaly blessed//
a man so oppressed//
a little obsessed//
bound to be best//
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reallly weak man....you need elevating real bad...on lines..and structure...and these // dont use them...they make ur verse look retarded...and make the site look stupid..
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DAZZLE
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Easier to battle ya mum, she brought yo here so il use slyness~to~diss~her...
No dough no love and ya rappers money....... is a minus~figure...
I could beat you with quick keyed lines coz im just~that~sick...
Take this easy, you cant write for shit....your dys~lex~ic...
You disrespect god?, well i dont give a fuck for him so cant hate you for it...
but god jesus and this MC all have somethin in common...YOUR ALL BULLSHIT!!
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how did you know he was bullshit?, lol...nice verse dude...yet againt~these~dont~help....ur punchlines wasnt to bad...which got my vote....elevate some more dude

v/ DAZZLE

can i get an RTF as well....Cheers homies....its in my sig...werd

Deranged 09-08-05 09:03 PM

Voted For: DAZZLE

LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Do I really have to explain this shit?I mean..damn.M.C Blasemphy...wtf?NOT one punch trown from you.Just a bunch of basic shit.A lot of it didn't even diss.

I'm lyricaly blessed//
a man so oppressed//
a little obsessed//
bound to be best//
^^this sopposed to be 4 lines?...all of them self glorified urself...when u sopposed to be dissin the other guy.

SO I vote Dazzle for actually droppin a real verse.

Vote-Dazzle
RTF BELOW IN SIG :thumbup:


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