Colour
Today my soul was coloured black with grief/
Coloured a misty cloud like a deep ocean coral reef/ A dark, solemn colour...one to mirror my thoughts/ Thoughts that can only be connected by slashing the dots/ Tired and weary, my soul is aching from stress/ Sad as it is and slowly getting more depressed/ And as I'm sitting here talking about colour, I'm sickened/ Trying to clear the smoke and the emotion has thickened/ Oh the colours, so bright and beautiful in hue/ While I'm quickly dying inside, unlike the rest of you/ I'm trying to keep my composure, but i'm feeling the strain though/ Rip my spirit to pieces and place all my colours in the rainbow/ |
aww shit, that was next level, i'm feeling this
only thing i think u shoulda done to make this hotter was add like other feelings and compare them to other colors, but this still was tight. -Epik |
Tight Shit Girl , "While I'm quickly dying inside, unlike the rest of you" . . . Even Though I'm More Like You Than You Think ! This Was Really Good , Keep Writing And I'll Keep Reading !
Peace & Love ! |
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