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BaByGeE894 08-05-02 01:56 AM

Colour
 
Today my soul was coloured black with grief/
Coloured a misty cloud like a deep ocean coral reef/
A dark, solemn colour...one to mirror my thoughts/
Thoughts that can only be connected by slashing the dots/
Tired and weary, my soul is aching from stress/
Sad as it is and slowly getting more depressed/
And as I'm sitting here talking about colour, I'm sickened/
Trying to clear the smoke and the emotion has thickened/
Oh the colours, so bright and beautiful in hue/
While I'm quickly dying inside, unlike the rest of you/
I'm trying to keep my composure, but i'm feeling the strain though/
Rip my spirit to pieces and place all my colours in the rainbow/

Epik Truth 08-05-02 02:05 AM

aww shit, that was next level, i'm feeling this
only thing i think u shoulda done to make this hotter was add like other feelings and compare them to other colors, but this still was tight.

-Epik

Liquid Flame 08-05-02 02:36 AM

Tight Shit Girl , "While I'm quickly dying inside, unlike the rest of you" . . . Even Though I'm More Like You Than You Think ! This Was Really Good , Keep Writing And I'll Keep Reading !

Peace & Love !


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