Hit em Up
 

new track by me titled hit em up www.soundclick.com/verbalinfantry first track on the page let me get yalls feedback

I replied to:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186605
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=187482

i like this...it was hot...your flow is real fluent i like that shit...word stay up

damn i thought it would be the hit um up beat:(your flow was good punches werent really there not really great far from it flow was on point good there hook wasnt good either overall this was a decent track but i think you concentrated way too much on vocab and flow here and it hurt you lyrical has a west coast type feel to it

thanks uppin thissss

holy shit, the flow is so fast on this.where u from man? cant put my finger on it but u gotta accent....i like how ur flow switches up in this... this should be a featured song.. chorus is blazin... cant beleive i havent peeped u b4, u one of the best on rv ive seen. real nyce mang. get at me if u wanna spot on my mixtape as a guest. good sh!t

return tha favor pleez
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=187958

shit is nice........beat is cool, haha like CAL i thought u were gon b bussin sum diss track ova pacs hit em up....hook is nice, ur braeaths r really loud n noticeable, lyrically this is now, some dope multis in this...i think u shud turn ur vocals up a lil bit, there sort of muffled in the beat a bit...this track was nice...i think betta mixin wid make this track so much better, 4 what it is it is good not as gd as sum of ur otha shit that i b jammin 2...8/10 Peace :thumbup:

beat is dope...flow is nice...sometimes fast flows dont sound right on these kind of beats...but you pulled it off son, good job on that...Delivery is straight...Lyrics is coo, from what i understand, your losing me a lil bit...lol...but anyway, the chorus is good...im feeling that shit...2nd verse i can understand you more, cuz you slowed down your flow...but its still nice...Overall this was a nice track...im feeling this shit...keep doing you homie...