new track by me titled hit em up www.soundclick.com/verbalinfantry first track on the page let me get yalls feedback

I replied to:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186605
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=187482

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www.soundclick.com/lethalgk

i like this...it was hot...your flow is real fluent i like that shit...word stay up

damn i thought it would be the hit um up beatyour flow was good punches werent really there not really great far from it flow was on point good there hook wasnt good either overall this was a decent track but i think you concentrated way too much on vocab and flow here and it hurt you lyrical has a west coast type feel to it

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vvv AND A NEW LEVEL OF HERB EMERGES vvv

^^in other words your scared running from a battle on a site made for battling and your mod so you dont have to battle you just duck and pop shit?
herb

thanks uppin thissss

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www.soundclick.com/lethalgk

holy shit, the flow is so fast on this.where u from man? cant put my finger on it but u gotta accent....i like how ur flow switches up in this... this should be a featured song.. chorus is blazin... cant beleive i havent peeped u b4, u one of the best on rv ive seen. real nyce mang. get at me if u wanna spot on my mixtape as a guest. good sh!t

return tha favor pleez
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=187958

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best Audio Head May- the Omen*

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shit is nice........beat is cool, haha like CAL i thought u were gon b bussin sum diss track ova pacs hit em up....hook is nice, ur braeaths r really loud n noticeable, lyrically this is now, some dope multis in this...i think u shud turn ur vocals up a lil bit, there sort of muffled in the beat a bit...this track was nice...i think betta mixin wid make this track so much better, 4 what it is it is good not as gd as sum of ur otha shit that i b jammin 2...8/10 Peace

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