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MY ABC's
I think this peice is very creative and It was challenging...Im also planning to do it audio...enjoy
yo yo yo yo... Ayo Adrenaline's an addict to ass-whoopin and arrogance Badly bustin bastards and breakin outta banishment this Canadian cat's cappin cold leavin clouded combustion Dustin y'all debris desperately into dark dirty dungeons Efficiently eradicatin enemies and endin there equivalence while Finishin foes and floodin fiends without found fingerprints Guys keep guessin while im gradually gettin godly gifted Hissin at hooligans and hurtin harshly but it's hardly hinted I'm indestructably intense and invented wit immense illness havin Juvenile jackoffs joltin down hills just like Jack and Jill is Killin flow's wit keyboards and knifin Knights wit Kryptonite Leavin loads of lands literally left without a link of life My main mission mentally misinterpreted by mortal morons Not knowing nothin cuz these niggas nerves aint normal neurons im the Only one omnipotent to outnumberin obstacles any Person pleadin a death plot is plausibly a probable im Quiet but quick to quarrel wit da queer quite quickly any Rash response results in a steer quite risky anything Soudin similar to these sick spits is sarcastic This kid's about to take the throne usin tools and tank tactics im an Unknown legend undeniably unpredictable Vowin to vapourize and vanquish all vermin known visible just Wastin ur whole wackness and ur wussy whore ways like Xena im a warrior x'in u like xerox n' X-rays I got Yip yappin yellow bellies yellin like egg yolks im Zoned-in, zappin fools zig zaggin like zygotes... and know y'all know y'all ABC's so next time y'all can sing wit me...(and try and keep up) lol... |
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thaat is creative, tight shit man.....i really liked it, nice vocab and structure...just creative....9/10
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damn straight homie....tell me that's not fire...you know damn right that shit's hot...ayo uppin this to the damn top niggaz...dont sleep on dis shit...
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yeah man, i enjoyed this shit, it actually flowed quite nicely....props to ya......the m line was the best because every word but one was an m, lol....i liked the j line the best though, some other hot ones......haha, pretty funny/nice self-glorifyin, lol.....keep up homie, this was hot
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yeah man...ya creative juices are really flowin...good shit fam...9/10
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uppin...if you dont know your abc's then read them here lol..
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dis was real ill! VERY creative n da flow was on point once i started readin it i started to realllllly get into it lol; good structure n wat not.....
My main mission mentally misinterpreted by mortal morons Not knowing nothin cuz these niggas nerves aint normal neurons ^^fav lines good shit homie keep up da good work...1 |
uppin...dont sleep on dis...
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i didn't leave you a link cuz i had nothing for you to return the favor on.....but can you return the favor on this OM?
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=188394 |
this was a pretty good drop i liked the way everything flowed good vocab and everything. but i have heard this concept used before on a mixtape a while back but none the less this was still hot.
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this was decent, some of your lines didnt make much sense
though to be honest but alot did, good piece overall.... stay up man...... |
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ya i'll return the fav soon fam... |
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yo actually your referring to papoose...I heard that mixtape too...and that's where I got inspired to do it...werd |
Beautiful mang.........i wish i was like that man......onni thing betta would be if u said it as in an audio
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