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Off my Nutz...Doe and Stylez collab #2
*niggaz betta understand...Doe Bagz and R Stylez still around...heres anotha fuckin exclusive freestyle for yall cats...peep dis... [hook: R Stylez] get off my nutz!...hoes, women, bitches and sluts lil smuts on my cock like im "sperm-r-us" what tha fuck!...i know u only afta my bucks so get off me hoe...get off me, get off me -repeat 2x- [verse 1: Doe Bagz] dis chick be buggin on a daily basis when she hear my name it must be my fame my rings or my swagger in my pimp game she called me lame when we met but my bread made her wet she wanted my doe, but tha dick was sumthin she wont regret but she was a shiesty bitch, creepin to steal my cream but i did a "cassidy" move and gave her ass "blank dreams" i had my money scheam like its was nothin to hustle hard but dis bitch was greedy, tryin to flow but she suck like shard guess its my fault dat she got mad when i ran outta bread she did anythang for it, gave me pussy and offered head but i didnt fall for it cuz bein fooled aint neva been my style but tha more i lied bout bein broke tha more offers were foul so i wrote her a note, bagged her shit and sat it on tha porch it read, "bitch get off my nutz and my doe", and i sung of course... [hook: R Stylez] get off my nutz!...hoes, women, bitches and sluts lil smuts on my cock like im "sperm-r-us" what tha fuck!...i know u only afta my bucks so get off me hoe...get off me, get off me -repeat 2x- [verse 2: R Stylez] well damn! dis bitch lovin me more by tha hour mayne but when she slip and ask for money she gets nothang im not a playa mayne...i jus know tha tricks of tha trade keepin hoes locked like vice grips they face white like colgate cuz when i get brain i like to bust all in the facial place oops, my bad if a lil got in ya "seein" space but back to tha topic, these bitches be chasin me like im supa dupa rich or sumthin, runnin wit they ashy knees but i do got chesse, dont get me wrong cuz i aint broke nigga i sell my underground shit from january to december im a winner, rollin wit my homie, we both in da D he got tha weed, i got tha condoms, we both got bitches indeed and them hoes fuck like they on speed, suck like they on X they fuck like they on speed, suck like they on X they fuck like they on speed, suck like they on X (i said!) they fuck like they on speed, suck like they on X ...lmfao... [hook: R Stylez] get off my nutz!...hoes, women, bitches and sluts lil smuts on my cock like im "sperm-r-us" what tha fuck!...i know u only afta my bucks so get off me hoe...get off me, get off me -repeat 2x- *yeah man...Doe Bagz, da don of donz...R Stylez, supa repeater man...haha...look out for part two usin his last 2 bars...like mike jones a lil bit...yeah...leave feed peoplez!!!* |
she called me lame when we met but my bread made her wet
she wanted my doe, but tha dick was sumthin she wont regret but she was a shiesty bitch, creepin to steal my cream but i did a "cassidy" move and gave her ass "blank dreams" ^^^ that part was tight had me laughin, an real good flow too.. an the cassidy line had me like ''oooh''....nice shit Doe...an take the free agent out ya sig lol stylez, ya shit was aight too, ya had nice flow throughout both verses, good cacthy rhythm ta the song an the sorta shit you'd see on the charts, lol...nice shit, 7.5/10, keep 'em droppin famz. |
thanx fam...uppin dis shit
oh yeah...siggy changed, lmao -DB |
lol nice ish show em bitches how it iz
8/10 man nice collabo |
u already know!...uppin
-DB |
^^he already knows, like 112 lol...
personally I didn't really like this one doe...the flow was aiight and everything...r styles had a good verse on here...but I just wasn't feelin it...I dunno...maybe i aint into songs about girls right now...i've seen better from you...well that's my feed... uppin for the doe bagz.. |
yeah...im sick of makin OMz bout hoes but dats tha shit im on right now...im tryin to get creative...but not now...im in tha spotlight for dis type of shit...lmao
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ic...lol.. .
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hellz yeah......
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Nice Collabo, Good Flow, And It Was Consistant, Good Shyt~
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thanx fam...uppin
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This was an iight drop.. Lol you had a couple fillers
some nice bars , the best i saw was: she called me lame when we met but my bread made her wet she wanted my doe, but tha dick was sumthin she wont regret but she was a shiesty bitch, creepin to steal my cream but i did a "cassidy" move and gave her ass "blank dreams" LOL im loving it , this was dope You had some nice wordplay , some okay vocab I felt you could have choosen your words alittle better Maybe some harder punchlines.. overall it was a good drop Both had okay structure , pretty decent corus keep it up and drop a link or this will be CLOSED |
thanx bone...whats up fam?
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=188904 ^there, u happy now nigga?...lol uppin |
funny thing is, your probly like 12 or some shit, on only ever seen a pussy on your computer screen.
Rap about things real to you man, stop tryin to act a fuckin player, that shit aint foolin a single person. |
lol,......^^ real talk........
but it was ordinary to be honest... open mic is to showcase skill...something original not saying you suck man, but this was really not nothin original in my opinion ........srry pz |
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