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Old 05-03-05, 10:32 AM   #1
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Off my Nutz...Doe and Stylez collab #2

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*niggaz betta understand...Doe Bagz and R Stylez still around...heres anotha fuckin exclusive freestyle for yall cats...peep dis...

[hook: R Stylez]
get off my nutz!...hoes, women, bitches and sluts
lil smuts on my cock like im "sperm-r-us"
what tha fuck!...i know u only afta my bucks
so get off me hoe...get off me, get off me
-repeat 2x-

[verse 1: Doe Bagz]
dis chick be buggin on a daily basis when she hear my name
it must be my fame my rings or my swagger in my pimp game
she called me lame when we met but my bread made her wet
she wanted my doe, but tha dick was sumthin she wont regret
but she was a shiesty bitch, creepin to steal my cream
but i did a "cassidy" move and gave her ass "blank dreams"
i had my money scheam like its was nothin to hustle hard
but dis bitch was greedy, tryin to flow but she suck like shard
guess its my fault dat she got mad when i ran outta bread
she did anythang for it, gave me pussy and offered head
but i didnt fall for it cuz bein fooled aint neva been my style
but tha more i lied bout bein broke tha more offers were foul
so i wrote her a note, bagged her shit and sat it on tha porch
it read, "bitch get off my nutz and my doe", and i sung of course...


[hook: R Stylez]
get off my nutz!...hoes, women, bitches and sluts
lil smuts on my cock like im "sperm-r-us"
what tha fuck!...i know u only afta my bucks
so get off me hoe...get off me, get off me
-repeat 2x-

[verse 2: R Stylez]
well damn! dis bitch lovin me more by tha hour mayne
but when she slip and ask for money she gets nothang
im not a playa mayne...i jus know tha tricks of tha trade
keepin hoes locked like vice grips they face white like colgate
cuz when i get brain i like to bust all in the facial place
oops, my bad if a lil got in ya "seein" space
but back to tha topic, these bitches be chasin me
like im supa dupa rich or sumthin, runnin wit they ashy knees
but i do got chesse, dont get me wrong cuz i aint broke nigga
i sell my underground shit from january to december
im a winner, rollin wit my homie, we both in da D
he got tha weed, i got tha condoms, we both got bitches indeed
and them hoes fuck like they on speed, suck like they on X
they fuck like they on speed, suck like they on X
they fuck like they on speed, suck like they on X
(i said!) they fuck like they on speed, suck like they on X
...lmfao...


[hook: R Stylez]
get off my nutz!...hoes, women, bitches and sluts
lil smuts on my cock like im "sperm-r-us"
what tha fuck!...i know u only afta my bucks
so get off me hoe...get off me, get off me
-repeat 2x-

*yeah man...Doe Bagz, da don of donz...R Stylez, supa repeater man...haha...look out for part two usin his last 2 bars...like mike jones a lil bit...yeah...leave feed peoplez!!!*
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Old 05-03-05, 10:42 AM   #2
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she called me lame when we met but my bread made her wet
she wanted my doe, but tha dick was sumthin she wont regret
but she was a shiesty bitch, creepin to steal my cream
but i did a "cassidy" move and gave her ass "blank dreams"
^^^
that part was tight
had me laughin, an real good flow too..
an the cassidy line had me like ''oooh''....nice shit Doe...an take the free agent out ya sig lol

stylez, ya shit was aight too, ya had nice flow throughout both verses, good cacthy rhythm ta the song an the sorta shit you'd see on the charts, lol...nice shit, 7.5/10, keep 'em droppin famz.
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Old 05-03-05, 11:08 AM   #3
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thanx fam...uppin dis shit
oh yeah...siggy changed, lmao

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Old 05-03-05, 12:37 PM   #4
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lol nice ish show em bitches how it iz

8/10 man nice collabo
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Old 05-03-05, 12:44 PM   #5
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u already know!...uppin

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Old 05-03-05, 01:35 PM   #6
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^^he already knows, like 112 lol...

personally I didn't really like this one doe...the flow was aiight and everything...r styles had a good verse on here...but I just wasn't feelin it...I dunno...maybe i aint into songs about girls right now...i've seen better from you...well that's my feed...

uppin for the doe bagz..
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Old 05-03-05, 01:42 PM   #7
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yeah...im sick of makin OMz bout hoes but dats tha shit im on right now...im tryin to get creative...but not now...im in tha spotlight for dis type of shit...lmao
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Old 05-03-05, 01:48 PM   #8
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ic...lol.. .
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Old 05-03-05, 01:50 PM   #9
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hellz yeah......
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Old 05-03-05, 02:55 PM   #10
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Nice Collabo, Good Flow, And It Was Consistant, Good Shyt~
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Old 05-03-05, 02:58 PM   #11
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thanx fam...uppin
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Old 05-03-05, 03:36 PM   #12
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This was an iight drop.. Lol you had a couple fillers
some nice bars , the best i saw was:
she called me lame when we met but my bread made her wet
she wanted my doe, but tha dick was sumthin she wont regret
but she was a shiesty bitch, creepin to steal my cream
but i did a "cassidy" move and gave her ass "blank dreams"
LOL im loving it , this was dope
You had some nice wordplay , some okay vocab
I felt you could have choosen your words alittle better
Maybe some harder punchlines.. overall it was a good drop
Both had okay structure , pretty decent corus
keep it up and drop a link or this will be CLOSED
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Old 05-03-05, 09:22 PM   #13
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thanx bone...whats up fam?

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=188904
^there, u happy now nigga?...lol

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Old 05-04-05, 10:46 PM   #14
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funny thing is, your probly like 12 or some shit, on only ever seen a pussy on your computer screen.

Rap about things real to you man, stop tryin to act a fuckin player, that shit aint foolin a single person.
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Old 05-04-05, 11:34 PM   #15
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lol,......^^ real talk........
but it was ordinary to be honest...
open mic is to showcase skill...something original
not saying you suck man, but this was really not
nothin original in my opinion ........srry pz
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