Quickie
 

aiight this goes out to all the ladies out there.....i just wana show you how i do this

I pick you up then leave, just dont have much trust in me
Cuz see there aint no touchin me, i just touch to please
Bust and leave, lift up the knees, just to hear you scream
Dont come near me unless you phene for a sex fiend
Cuz i dont need no disease nor do i get any of those
Take off ya clothes, fuck quick before and after shows
Bustin loads then take ya clothes and boot you out
Now i gota find me a new ass, another bitch to scout
Bustin quick then im out, fuckin then leavin is what i do
What u think cuz we fucked i gota be more than a friend to you
Well boo i gota tell the truth, im not the man in ya dreams
Im the man you need under the sheets and between ya knees
Cuz see, me i just get what i wanted there isnt any frontin
Like scrumpin?, then come jump-in, cuz i'll teach ya somthin
I aint the type to wife a broad, my sex always gets an applause
If ya wake up sore or cant walk after, im the reason of the cause
Cuz these broads like how i slang that dick, cuz shit i fuck
Not down for romancin bitches, nothin but dirty and rough
Cant get enough, but dont call back, cuz that isnt right girl
A one night fuck girl, hair frizzy cuz i fucked out all your curls
My sex is out this world, so what if im just tryin to bust a nut
But each and every time i fuck, i rip that corner and rubber up
Aint into no blubber buts, or boney fucks, my sex isnt tame
Dont think you aint comin, cuz when i fuck, you loose ya brains
Leavin with stains, dont need any brain cuz my dick is slayin
And dont expect to lay, cuz when im done, bitch you aint stayin

All i do is fuck, fuck, fuck
Pull out and bust, bust, bust
Trust im just tryin to fuck
Pull out and suck till i bust


keystled........ :laugh:

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that was on sum L.L. shit
I can dig that
That was not sumthan I really get in too readin
but
tha sjit was aiight!!
I guess it takes ah lady tah feel that junt!

coo line tho"All i do is fuck, fuck, fuck
Pull out and bust, bust, bust
Trust im just tryin to fuck
Pull out and suck till i bust"
^^^Yeah!!!..okay its sorta raunchy but still I feel that!! that's what really niggaz want!^^

ya this was a solid fuck piece flow fell off in one place,
"nothin but dirty n rough" but other then that the concept was aight
but i did feel you didnt set a good approach from beginning to end
you summed up your topic like 5 times in seperate bars, it was koo
dont get me wrong but you couldve made it alot more interestin than
just dragging on the fact that you fuck'em then dump'em, get me?..
closer was koo, good ending, alot of ya bars n ryhme scheme were proper
vocab couldve been up'd a little more thou, all in all, nice drop..
especially if it was a free key n you didnt fly back n change a bunch of shit..
werd, thats feedback, enjoy, pz
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*goes back to ll thread n tells him it was aight*

haha thanks man.....thats all i wanted........and yes it was a keystyle thats why i kept summin up the topic so much i guess...lol....cuz i thought quick........hence the title has 2 meanings :thumbup:

good... very good... don't worry the topic was good... not my style but 7 out of 10... nah... 8 lol

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Nice topic. Lol, I like the first 2 lines and didn't see too muhc multis after that but it kept me readin. Hook was funny, Some lines seem stretched but it don't matter. It made me laugh. RTF on my OM

nice shyt~ not to many multis~rhymez scheme was alright but shyt was nice n keep it up Playa!~Deucez~ :thumbup: :evilgrin:
i would spit a verse in open mic but my fkin head is poundin im sik then a motherf***! seriously im sik!LoL

thanks man.....who cares if your sick......take some asprin and bust out some sickle shit