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05-05-05, 06:41 PM | #1 | ||||
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IP: CE10 8C0C
aiight this goes out to all the ladies out there.....i just wana show you how i do this
I pick you up then leave, just dont have much trust in me Cuz see there aint no touchin me, i just touch to please Bust and leave, lift up the knees, just to hear you scream Dont come near me unless you phene for a sex fiend Cuz i dont need no disease nor do i get any of those Take off ya clothes, fuck quick before and after shows Bustin loads then take ya clothes and boot you out Now i gota find me a new ass, another bitch to scout Bustin quick then im out, fuckin then leavin is what i do What u think cuz we fucked i gota be more than a friend to you Well boo i gota tell the truth, im not the man in ya dreams Im the man you need under the sheets and between ya knees Cuz see, me i just get what i wanted there isnt any frontin Like scrumpin?, then come jump-in, cuz i'll teach ya somthin I aint the type to wife a broad, my sex always gets an applause If ya wake up sore or cant walk after, im the reason of the cause Cuz these broads like how i slang that dick, cuz shit i fuck Not down for romancin bitches, nothin but dirty and rough Cant get enough, but dont call back, cuz that isnt right girl A one night fuck girl, hair frizzy cuz i fucked out all your curls My sex is out this world, so what if im just tryin to bust a nut But each and every time i fuck, i rip that corner and rubber up Aint into no blubber buts, or boney fucks, my sex isnt tame Dont think you aint comin, cuz when i fuck, you loose ya brains Leavin with stains, dont need any brain cuz my dick is slayin And dont expect to lay, cuz when im done, bitch you aint stayin All i do is fuck, fuck, fuck Pull out and bust, bust, bust Trust im just tryin to fuck Pull out and suck till i bust keystled........
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05-05-05, 06:58 PM | #2 | ||||
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IP: CE10 8C0C
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05-09-05, 07:58 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: CE10 8C0C
up up up up up up
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05-09-05, 08:34 PM | #4 | |||
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IP: 99A1 48F7
that was on sum L.L. shit
I can dig that That was not sumthan I really get in too readin but tha sjit was aiight!! I guess it takes ah lady tah feel that junt! coo line tho"All i do is fuck, fuck, fuck Pull out and bust, bust, bust Trust im just tryin to fuck Pull out and suck till i bust" ^^^Yeah!!!..okay its sorta raunchy but still I feel that!! that's what really niggaz want!^^
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05-10-05, 06:35 PM | #5 | ||||
leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: DAA3 1F21
ya this was a solid fuck piece flow fell off in one place,
"nothin but dirty n rough" but other then that the concept was aight but i did feel you didnt set a good approach from beginning to end you summed up your topic like 5 times in seperate bars, it was koo dont get me wrong but you couldve made it alot more interestin than just dragging on the fact that you fuck'em then dump'em, get me?.. closer was koo, good ending, alot of ya bars n ryhme scheme were proper vocab couldve been up'd a little more thou, all in all, nice drop.. especially if it was a free key n you didnt fly back n change a bunch of shit.. werd, thats feedback, enjoy, pz . *goes back to ll thread n tells him it was aight*
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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05-10-05, 06:37 PM | #6 | ||||
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IP: CE10 8C0C
haha thanks man.....thats all i wanted........and yes it was a keystyle thats why i kept summin up the topic so much i guess...lol....cuz i thought quick........hence the title has 2 meanings
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05-10-05, 10:13 PM | #7 | ||||
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IP: 7D8B DD8E
good... very good... don't worry the topic was good... not my style but 7 out of 10... nah... 8 lol
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05-13-05, 05:17 PM | #8 | ||||
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IP: CE10 8C0C
up up up up up up
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05-14-05, 05:31 PM | #9 | ||||
Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: AB23 98FF
Nice topic. Lol, I like the first 2 lines and didn't see too muhc multis after that but it kept me readin. Hook was funny, Some lines seem stretched but it don't matter. It made me laugh. RTF on my OM
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05-14-05, 07:47 PM | #10 | |||||||
~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
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IP: 0825 899A
nice shyt~ not to many multis~rhymez scheme was alright but shyt was nice n keep it up Playa!~Deucez~
i would spit a verse in open mic but my fkin head is poundin im sik then a motherf***! seriously im sik!LoL
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05-14-05, 09:21 PM | #11 | ||||
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IP: CE10 8C0C
thanks man.....who cares if your sick......take some asprin and bust out some sickle shit
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