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..:..::Crack In The Flesh::..:.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189861 Somethin About My Walk.....Got Niggas Wishin My Legs Theirs Quick Flares...Send Bodies Shoppin 4 Routes To Heavens Stairs Yes, Ack Got Dat Crack That 'Swell Cilla' Until Each 'Nostrils Fat' On Point, Sure, Exact....Ya'll 'Under Tracks' While I 'OVER-LAP'! Give Dicks A Wack?..I 'Prevent Germs' From My 'Colgate Plaque' This Shit You Lack, I'm Itchin For Water Like A 'Purified Scratch'! Sink Kids Wit Shots................Wash Ya Children Up Wit Bullets Knock Out Uncontrollable Nuts....& Disrupt Da Dickheads Fluids! Trig Blast Spit Gats Through It, Jus Lay Down You About To Fall Toss Niggas Guts 'UP Da Stairs' Then Drop Em 'DOWN Da Hall'! Motions...I Neva Pause, Faggots Fuck Wit Me Dey Catchin Sars Literally Catchin Sars, Cuz My 'Jails Cancer'...Like 'Deadly Bars'! Sniff His Drug You Losin Arms.........Get High Off Ya Own Limbs Ack Shoot Chests-In, Then 'Feed Em Trees' Like Appetizer Timbs Smokin Ya Flesh.......Puff Combs......Nigga I'm Brushin Ya Flesh Open Mouth...Got Da Right To EMPTY BOWELS Til Nothin Is Left! Juelz? Like 'Live Drugs Laughin'....I'm Human Crack-In Da Flesh! *Last Line...Crackin Up Is When Somebody Laughin They Ass Off Feedback On Dis One...I Dont Wanna See This In Da Boondocks Like Last Time |
damn...Ack yur sick wit metas lol...structure was PERFECT...only seen better from OneStepBeyond lol...9/10...rtf
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now dats a illunatik right there!...rite, u put it down right here...LFS said it fam...structure and metas was hot...we gots to collab...PM me when u think of sumthin to go off of my nigga...4real
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tru get me on that shit...
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Damn Ackrite, you know ya drug game huh man??!
dope rhymes, man.....mettas an the wordplay was sickerning, flow was right on point, fuck what people say like ''yo da structure is tight''...like that matters, lol...but yeah, flow, mettas an wordplay was sick, an the concept of the peice an the playin around with drug related rhymes was DOPE lol....keep it up fam, solid drop. |
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Lol Good Lookin Nigga.......Yeah I Peeped Ya Shit.......Replied Too & Yeah Scream At Me About Da Collab |
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Jeah Fam.....ILL All Day......Had To Put It Down For Da Crew Feel Me......But Jeah Scream At Me For Dat Collab......I'm Down |
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Jeah @ Da Structure Lol....Of Course I Know About My Drug Game....Always, But No Doubt.....Its A ILL Thing Feel Me?? |
big!!!!
that's my rappin type I dunno why niggaz say this ain't creativity... the best structure.. these one gets a 10 out of 10... good job |
AHA Good Lookin Ax............10 Dats Real.............Stay Up Family
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yo sickness man sickness...damn so much thought Im coughin..*cough cough* lol
I enjoyed this one...keep doin ya thing man...is that u in da sig?...(prolly a stupid question,but u never know) |
Good Looks Nigga.........Yeah Thats Me In Da Sig..........Gotta Be Original Feel Me?
Uppin Dis Shit Once Again |
Uppin Dis Shit.......................Drop Feed Niggas....................Come On
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i thought this was real creative....flow was on point you had a nice structure, nice vocab usage and usage of multi's....a nice drop stay up fam
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