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"Tempt Me"
Written to "Threat" by Jay-z.... UNTRACEABLE BIGCITY OSB see i told ya'll not to tempt me man cuz aint nobody rippin this like i can so tell ya mans to throw up them hands my plan is to get him open then advance if i stick to the plan ya man will have a slim to none chance cuz when i get that chance to advance im gonna alter his stance the way my footwork moves it might look like im dancin on you its startin to look like x-mas cuz my 'presence' 'prances' on dudes but dont compare me to you cuz you aint live what i been through so compared to you im just a really hairy dude....someone ya cant see dont ask me to stop the beef between us cuz my trigga finger is ancy isnt that fancy how my bullets keep you prancing around the streets got ya tap dancin to the beat of my heat cuz i just cock, pull, and repeat so before you speak about squashin the beef you better believe me that its easy for me to keep you bleeding profusely and weeping see i told ya'll not to tempt me man cuz aint nobody rippin this like i can so tell ya mans to throw up them hands my plan is to get him open then advance uhh...riddle me this, yall thought you'd b killin me quick? thats silly as shit, dog i got about a milly in bricks im really legit, dip before i blow- the- nine- quick fuck wit me, i'll have the E.R. workin over- time- shifts nigga, gettin yo ass beat down, was all part of the scheme you woulda thought i was Ralph Nader, the way i "party wit green" why you screamin dude?.. trash the mic ya need to lose or City will drop "shells" on ya top like them Adida's shoes...bitches see i told ya'll not to tempt me man cuz aint nobody rippin this like i can so tell ya mans to throw up them hands my plan is to get him open then advance Better yet riddle me that... when then threats are stated, Will you continue to be wack as fuck or will you get elevated? Ya see the truth... When the smoke from the shells have faded, from the basement to the studio, easy to tell whos made it.. the mournin will start now... not true that the laws above, Ya pourin ya heart out when that .357 makes you fall in love, Or a .44... shortys know it most definetly open dudes face, That four five will have you stumblin like a broken shoe lace, Why they say ABC is easy as 123? but i disagree with guys, my lyrics ain't in arms reach like ya sleeves were tied, i believe 123 is easier and now they askin me for lies, but homie this one carries twos and three four fives... Feedback I left |
you're a whore........FOR NOT LETIN ME ON THIS! lol..nice shit....yur structure was FUCKED OSB...by your standards lol.....nice shit Trace...the multis made that shit flow like one continual sentence...City...i hate you....CUZ I WASNT ON THIS LOL! you scare me sometimes with yur skills....9/10...[sad]let me on next time....[/sad] lol
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uppin this hot shizzle :thumbup:
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Untraceable: Nigga that flow was killin and damn i felt that shit Ah dat was nice 9.3/10
Bigcity: Nice Rhymeing like da way u stick wit it so sik i like'd it 9.1/10 OSB: Nice as fuck u had little multis like the other but nice i liked it to 9.1/10 good drop nigga's Vote on my battle lol..... |
This was a pretty nice piece..
I was really feelin it one of your best drops.. Your flow was good, your structure was off alittle , and i think you should work on lining up your bars, wordplay and vocan , were decent felt you should use alittle more complexity.. try to use deeper words, nice imagery , and emotions going into the peice.. keep it up |
thnaks for the feed famz uppin for more ;)
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uppin.............
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yeah...real talk, dis is one of yall best pieces i've seen from all yall...i was feelin it tha whole way thru...stay up my old NOK fam, lmao *tear*...but 4real...9/10 for dis piece right chea
and if u aint know, dis is Doe Bagz...changed tha name on ya...real talk |
haha i knew it was you....i dont forget famlay :thumbup:....uppin
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Fuck what he talkin this shit was hot!! |
return tha fava...1st link in my sig..."good mornin", its sum new shit fam...peep
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will do fam :thumbup:.......leave links we RTF (return the feed)
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uppin.............
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uppin..........:thumbup:
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oh shit i didnt even know this had dropped, but lets get some more feed in here, nah mean
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