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"Good Mornin"...finally found my style
*yo, dis tha dude Doe Bagz...oops, 10-4 and dis track is written under tha influence of Kanye West...so if it sound familiar dont trip, i know...BUT I DIDNT BITE NO LINES SO DONT BAG ME BOUT IT, K?...now lets begin* [hook] good mornin america, good mornin histeria good mornin to tha people of my hip-hop area good mornin to tha brothaz, good mornin to tha sistas good mornin to my folk and good mornin to dem skippaz -repeat 2x- [verse 1] good mornin im feelin good, good mornin im breathin good my mind runs like a engine so my thoughts stay in da hood waters thinner than blood so my folk stay sleepin good we in here livin as royalty but tha block is still understood im hustlin so im gettin bread, my girlfriend wont give me head she say its nasty but i like to tempt her while we in da bed good mornin to my fuckin school, 2007 we will all rule otha schools is closin but we sectioned off like 2 pools and we stay way too cool but dat ice make us frosted out but tha ice is fake, so dats why our necks is "money'd" out good mornin to my boy King, my brotha by any means and good mornin to all my fans dat stick right beside me eventhough is a few of yall, togetha we are supreme takin life for what its worth cuz if we dont well have nothing [hook] good mornin america, good mornin histeria good mornin to tha people of my hip-hop area good mornin to tha brothaz, good mornin to tha sistas good mornin to my folk and good mornin to dem skippaz -repeat 2x- *jus sumthin quick for yall until i finally drop anotha full track...now can a nigga get sum feed on dis?...plz be honest wit me, i gotta elevate* |
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i declare a upp to dis
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what tha fuck man?
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What Tha Fuck Is Wrong Wit U People???...damn, Guess My Name Aint Familiar No More...its Doe Bagz Bitches!!!...leaver Sum Fuckin Feed!!!
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this shit was pretty nice man........consistant.......but i've seen better......keep dropin fam 7/10
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thanx fam...uppin
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This was a pretty good drop, seen you do alot better
Structure was good, flow was on point ,alittle shacky in the middle Wordplay and vocab was alittle to simplistic for me.. Felt it could have been alot better... You had okay feeling , and good imagery .. Nice concept , nice very creative topic , seen you do alot better , keep it up |
I like it... too much, there was no point where u didn't flowed, but u need ta improve your vocab..... nice hook... 8/10
If we could rate the color I've rated 2/10 cuz I really had a hard time readin it |
IT was good, I liked the beginning the most, with the feeling good and shit. lol But overall it was a decent drop. I would enjoy some multis but thats just me. RTF on "past to present"
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it was ok, could have been a lil more thorough tho. coulda used some more metaphors in there. ya had some good flow and structure. maybe add a multie or two to make things more complex, ya feel me? but other than that a pretty solid drop
7/10 |
"im hustlin so im gettin bread, my girlfriend wont give me head"
lol..... ok drop, certain parts i liked better than others.... decent drop tho...lol at that line |
I'm reppin the 313 to the fullest
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Man Thats Was Alright Seen Other Postz N I know u Can Do Alot Better but u could have used alot more wordplay n metaz but its cool!
7/10 i need some uppin on my OM One Night Stand!must read n Reply |
damn...thanx yall...im bout to check out all yall shit...real fuckin talk!...*tear*
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