freestyle : the beginning
 

yo,
im the best in the site, matter of fact in the world
why u talking about jockeys, and u got a dyke for a girl?
imma keep chopp'in bricks, till i fill the block with perals
40 cal by the stomach, only way i take shot till i ERRL
bang bang??, u thought this was a porn film
change change??, from the weed game to crill's
blame blame, friends and fam, weed and phills
lame lames, who pop-shit but hold steel,
face get ate like whole meals
so when i blast ya best to believe ya flesh i'll look like oat-meal
bitch freez and hold still, while u bearly breath shaken like cold chills
im making an old deal, with a new friend who need a new touch
but when i flow each bar is like i need a new dutch

yo hold up let me roll something got my mind right....
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ok LETS GO!!

I get my mind right while shoting with my left is all i know
the lyrical doogie............................................ ............
cuz i got more verse then houser got journal entery after each one of hes show
slap my nuts on faces :evilgrin: from each one of hes hoes :hump:
walk by dolo throu a gang-fight.... and hang-man with flags on poles :laugh:
i'll toe-tag ya parents, after they was found crush by a truck on the main rode....

yo fuck that its ova kid ayo,

Peep what u said clown, ya beef is getting minced now
Cuz I should join the PBA, everytime I strike I knock Ten down
Ur short of the measure's fill, win? U can hope but u never will
So I suggest u coin my phrases then use em to buy some better skills"

ITS A WRAP!!!
fuck outta here and im just getting started....
this aint even really all i can do this aint shit compare to what i can do or will do just be ready mother fuckers the time is here 2005 the take-ova has begone.....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190361

my link so now lets see some feed back plez

thanks for u'r feed back fam....

upp'in for more....

upp'in this joint.....................

upp'in...............................

this was decent
some seriously stretched lines that throw ya off the read
but overall, just work on your structure...decent con

thanks fam it was something i just did quick to see how ya would take it befor i focus more i wanna see if people around here like raw freestyles or quick ones or pre-written verse that i really focus on and came hard??

so yea thanks for ya feed back fam..