Good evening rapverse
 

The mic was open so i quietly crept in
swept in from the English shores
ignore the haters that will analyse this data
that i just dotted checkin it for flaws
steppin through open doors
set on a mission doin internet tours
with a cause rap with meaning
don't waste time with lines that are demeaning
speak how i'm feelin' on everyday topics
respect to all women not viewing them as objects
most have lost it and strayed way off the path
travelled up their own a** after they signed their first autograph.....

Just a kwik Free keys from Klemit uk... Shout all uk massive B-Gurl, Ca$per, Ghost, Daub and any 1 feelin' me or not...... Peace more time ..... :thumbup:

not very long but it wuz good, good vocab needs a lil´betta structure

Very short... work on your structre... basically work on everything.. no offense, it didn't really keep me readin the whole time and ythats something you are really going to need when rapping... so basically work on your whole style, and persence basically... i know its a forum, but you can still make your presence felt.. :thumbup:

nice lil drop kidd'O.........good flow