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05-20-05, 02:32 PM | #1 | ||||||
New to RV
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Good evening rapverse
IP: C28A 8A38
The mic was open so i quietly crept in
swept in from the English shores ignore the haters that will analyse this data that i just dotted checkin it for flaws steppin through open doors set on a mission doin internet tours with a cause rap with meaning don't waste time with lines that are demeaning speak how i'm feelin' on everyday topics respect to all women not viewing them as objects most have lost it and strayed way off the path travelled up their own a** after they signed their first autograph..... Just a kwik Free keys from Klemit uk... Shout all uk massive B-Gurl, Ca$per, Ghost, Daub and any 1 feelin' me or not...... Peace more time ..... |
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05-20-05, 02:54 PM | #2 | ||||
Light Weight
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IP: 452E 0970
not very long but it wuz good, good vocab needs a lilĀ“betta structure
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05-20-05, 03:09 PM | #3 | ||||
Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: AB23 98FF
Very short... work on your structre... basically work on everything.. no offense, it didn't really keep me readin the whole time and ythats something you are really going to need when rapping... so basically work on your whole style, and persence basically... i know its a forum, but you can still make your presence felt..
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05-20-05, 03:31 PM | #4 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 90DE 7E67
nice lil drop kidd'O.........good flow
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