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AckRite 05-21-05 08:06 PM

::..All The Time..::
 


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189861


Street Life Is A Bitch...Niggas Dyin Ova Chicks...But Why? Follow Da Words...You'll Undastand

Shortie Caught My Eye.......Beauty Defined......Couldnt Escape My Sight
Her Words Were Soft...Though She Was Brought....Up Livin A Hood Life
Evil Absent, Nothin About Her Looked Trife......Ring? She Could Be Wife
Exchanged More Than Numbers...Dat Night....I Left Afta Fuckin Ha Right
Next Day We 2gether Walkin..Talkin..Bout Life & All Da Shit We Wanted
She Was My Visable Prize So I Flaunted....Real Diamonds Neva Pawnin
Said Baby Its You I'm Needin...To Keep Me Breathin....I Started Believin
Her Every Word, Fuckin Heathen......Little Did I Know, She Was Deceivin
But I Fell For Her Gift Of Love, Which Was Lust....Undercover, Goddamn!
Stay Grindin Tryna Provide 4 Her, At Da Same Time She Bonin My Mans!
Me? I Knew Not A Thing...Matta Fact...Ha Lust Had Me Caught In Things
Wit Hustlers, She Used 2 Fuck Em....Now They Seekin Vengence Within
My Heart & Soul....Lies I Neva Knew She Told....Dat My Ears Had 2 Hold
After Three Years, I Proposed....BUT!....Thats When All Da Drama Arose
Took Me 2 Her Crib...We Fuckin...Said She Feel Da Dick Inside Ha Ribs
Da Next Thing......I Hear Is Da Door Open.....And Various Shots Flyin In
Directly At Me???...Finally Realized....As She Sat There Ignorin My Cries
That The Whole Three Years Was Bribes......I Lie........In Puddles Of My
Own Blood, Had Da Nerve 2 Hug.....Me Once Before Escapin Wit Thugs
Lay There Dyin Slowly...Thinkin Back On How Much She Always Told Me
...Bout Niggas Feenin 4 Lust From Her, Looks Like She Didnt Know Me!


Now I'm Gone...................AHA...................$crea m At Me

mizz fyre 05-22-05 07:18 AM

nice drop....had a sorta deep meaning to it.....i sensed some emotion in there....structure was on point as usual, flow was flawless all i would say is maybe vocab could be upped a lil bit.....but a good drop anyway 8/10.........keep doing it fam

AckRite 05-22-05 09:26 PM

Jeah Ma Good Lookin......Fareal At Least You REPLIED.......Showed It Some Kinda Love, Niggas Treatin It Like Garbage Lol But Its W/E.......Much Appreciated Peep My Otha Shit

...$cream At Me...

AckRite 05-25-05 07:12 PM

$cream At Dis Shit People..............Aint Post It For Nothin Man...........Whats Good?

AckRite 06-08-05 07:04 PM

UM.....One Reply???.....WOW I'm Really Feelin The Love!!

SMFH

Chris Stylez 06-09-05 12:29 AM

Ayo i just cought up wit dis shit.........Dis waz off da chain was feelin da vibe flow eerything about it was on point N fire. you got mad talent N u should be burnin it in da studio not on know rapsite..........keep doin ya thang homie got mad respect for watcha doin

AckRite 06-10-05 04:00 PM

Jea I Hop In Da Studio Every Now & Then.....Not Regularly Tho.....But Good Looks Kid

UPPIN'


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