Affliction vs KhAoZ ThEoRy
 

Battle Rules:

10-Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


G-luck

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-22-05 at 04:45 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

KhAoZ ThEoRy has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-22-05 04:19 PM.

Trying A New Structure Thanx 2 B-Gurl Fo Da Hintz & Tipz..


Hit Diz Mark Out Da Park, Whyd U Even Step To Da Plate
Therez Plenty Fish In Da Sea An I Used Diz Fat Fuck Az Bait
Losingz Yo Fate Lyke A HighSchool Dropouts Existance
Id Lyke 2 See Yo Punchez Connect When We At Such A Distance
Ya Goin Down In History Az Da Ugliest 2 Grace Godz Green Earth
Not 2 Mention Da Only Child 2 Have Cosmetic Surgeory At Birth
Straight Up Mayn, Fo' A Newb U Aint All Dat Bad
At Least U Get My Thanx Fo Bein Da Easiest Win I Ever Had

Affliction has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-22-05 04:38 PM.

Uppin for votes............................................. ..............

Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

Nice Verse Both but Vote goes to
Khaoz!
Explanation
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Hit Diz Mark Out Da Park, Whyd U Even Step To Da Plate
Therez Plenty Fish In Da Sea An I Used Diz Fat Fuck Az Bait
iight 7/10
Losingz Yo Fate Lyke A HighSchool Dropouts Existance
Id Lyke 2 See Yo Punchez Connect When We At Such A Distance
^Good 8/10
Ya Goin Down In History Az Da Ugliest 2 Grace Godz Green Earth
Not 2 Mention Da Only Child 2 Have Cosmetic Surgeory At Birth
LoL^8/10
Straight Up Mayn, Fo' A Newb U Aint All Dat Bad
At Least U Get My Thanx Fo Bein Da Easiest Win I Ever Had
LoL^7.5/10
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affliction
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It don’t take a rocket scientist to discover how whack you are.
Your rap IQ points are low, stupid mc, you can’t even make a bar
Weak^6/10
Call your self khoas?, IF you the one who bombed the towers 9/11
You can elevate, by killing yourself and sent your own soul to heaven
^Weak6/10
I’m not a prophet, but I know your not going to win this battle
saw your last pieces, and believe me your easy like a baby with a rattle
^??6/10
And no people I’m not lying this kid got beat by a body wash product!
Your no profit, you can go into a coffee shop, but still can’t make star bucks
^(SMH)Make Sense6/10
Put C-4 on your keyboard but still your keys couldn’t make khoas
This kid thought he can spit lyrically nice by using Barbie floss
^6/10 Weak
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Affliction u could have done alot ALOT better man!this battle just wasnt urz!your verse didnt really make sense N didnt hit that hard!but holla back N Please RTF in my battlez!
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191308 VS Smokey
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191658 Vs XquizitLyricist

Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

son ya flow was a lil betta this time, tha otha cat wasn't really hittin hard, and I seen mah name homie, you want no part of me A"dick"tion

^^ Whatever.


Uppin................................

Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

It don’t take a rocket scientist to discover how whack you are.
Your rap IQ points are low, stupid mc, you can’t even make a bar
Call your self khoas?, IF you the one who bombed the towers 9/11
You can elevate, by killing yourself and sent your own soul to heaven
I’m not a prophet, but I know your not going to win this battle
saw your last pieces, and believe me your easy like a baby with a rattle
And no people I’m not lying this kid got beat by a body wash product!
Your no profit, you can go into a coffee shop, but still can’t make star bucks
Put C-4 on your keyboard but still your keys couldn’t make khoas
This kid thought he can spit lyrically nice by using Barbie floss

not a bad verse affliction but dere wuznt nuthin dat had me like ''oh'' when i wuz reading it do u kno wut i saying???? fo instance dat closer wuznt hitting at all, u need 2 focus on yo oppenent an making him look like a fewl, most of yo verse wuld of been ok fo an open mic verse but in a battle not many of yo linez hit hard

Hit Diz Mark Out Da Park, Whyd U Even Step To Da Plate
Therez Plenty Fish In Da Sea An I Used Diz Fat Fuck Az Bait
Losingz Yo Fate Lyke A HighSchool Dropouts Existance
Id Lyke 2 See Yo Punchez Connect When We At Such A Distance
Ya Goin Down In History Az Da Ugliest 2 Grace Godz Green Earth
Not 2 Mention Da Only Child 2 Have Cosmetic Surgeory At Birth
Straight Up Mayn, Fo' A Newb U Aint All Dat Bad
At Least U Get My Thanx Fo Bein Da Easiest Win I Ever Had

KhAoZ ThEoRy yo verse wuz pretty whack 2, u had 2 barz i wuz feeling da highschool existance bar an da closer.....dat closer won u diz battl, but at least u focused on making a mockery of yo oppenent which is also another thang dat goez in yo favor

Vote = KhAoZ ThEoRy

Hey Okay I Like How Diz Iz Goin, 3-0 I Will Return Da Vote If I See Yo Battlez On Da Forumz

Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

not a bad battle....

khaoz took this for better punches...

his structure improved like whoah and the closer was funny as fuck..

just Stop Typin With Caps Like This..... shits fukin annoying.

affliction, your structure was on top, flow was ok but ya punches didnt really hit and wer kinda played.

no hate...
rtf in sig.

Aiyyo I Appreciate The Vote Ill Hit Up Yo Battle Right Nah Dawg, Letz Get Dat Last Vote Peoplez..

Hey Letz Get Diz Last Vote So I Can Open Another Battle

Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

not a fair battle khaoz you merked him n u only had 4 bars he had 5 lol... u stayed consistant through your whole verse you had some kinda punches in there they didnt really hit hard but they hit harder than affliction good job man

affliction u need to elevate u need to focus on the punch more than the rhyme u are getting the rhymes but you are trying to hit him wit a weak punch you get what i'm sayin? u can rhyme with words that sound different but still rhyme u get what i'm saying?

both of your astructure is good stick with that for a bit just improve your punches and you'll be right

v/ khaoz for having harder hitting punches and staying more consistant in this battle... pzzzz