"Many Wayz Too Die"-Ghost
 

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Therez Many Optionz Too Choose From,Of Wayz To Die N Wayz To Live
So Live Ya Life Like It Was Endin,Or As if It Was Lords Blessin To Give-
Cuz It Only Takez "ONE SHOT" 2 End SOmething Thats Price-less (1)
Because Everyday i See "Scarz Carved" In People Like HOMEMADE "Dices"
Dyin Of An OVERDOSE Is Something Thats Common IN This World (2)
People Cant Get Enough POPPIN PILLZ,So Godz Workin On a New REFERRAL
CATCHING AIDZ been Here Decades,Aint NOthin New But is A threat (3)
Large Population Of People Who GIVE IT UP,Withouit Breakin a Sweat
MURDERERZ n KILLERZ Aint Gon Stop Killin,As If It Was An ADDICTION (4)
Hope They Go To Hell,But Da lord already Gotz His GATES under A RESITRICTION
Done Listed 4 Wayz To Die,Do i Got To list To Not PARTICIPATE IN GANGS (5)
One Day You a Gangster,Next Day Just Another TARGET For SHELLZ n BULLETS--
When It Rainz!
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Explanation About Linez:
Therez Many Optionz Too Choose From,Of Wayz To Die N Wayz To Live
So Live Ya Life Like It Was Endin,Or As if It Was Lords Blessin To Give-
1st ) Meanz therez lots of Choices To Make Of Livin N Dyin,
2nd Line) Meanz As if GOD Chose You To Live A SPECIAL Life! (know What I Mean) -ANGEL-

Cuz It Only Takez "ONE SHOT" 2 End SOmething Thats Price-less (1)
Because Everyday i See "Scarz Carved" In People Like HOMEMADE "Dices"
1st)A Gun Shot Can End Ya Life,N Ya Life Is Priceless
2nd)Gun Shot SCARZ in Wound,HomeMade dices Are Made by CARVING holes For DOTS on Dices!

Dyin Of An OVERDOSE Is Something Thats Common IN This World (2)
People Cant Get Enough POPPIN PILLZ,So Godz Workin On a New REFERRAL
1st) Lots of People Dye From OVERDOSIN n Is COMMON in This World
2nd)People OD n They "DIE" now God Gots To work on A New SOUL REFERRAL


CATCHING AIDZ been Here Decades,Aint NOthin New But is A threat (3)
Large Population Of People Who GIVE IT UP,Withouit Breakin a Sweat
1st)Catchin Aidz been Around For YEARZ n has Been A threat
2nd)Lots Of People (Give it Up)=HAVE SEX Without Hesitating


MURDERERZ n KILLERZ Aint Gon Stop Killin,As If It Was An ADDICTION (4)
Hope They Go To Hell,But Da lord already Gotz His GATES under A RESITRICTION
1st)If Murdererz N Killerz Kill Once they Gon Kill Again!N Continue Like An ADDICTION!
2nd)God Seez Whatcha Do N If You "KILL" which Is A SIN You Cant Enter the Gatez N Thats Why god Gots Them Under a RESTRICTION


Done Listed 4 Wayz To Die,Do i Got To list To Not PARTICIPATE IN GANGS (5)
One Day You a Gangster,Next Day Just Another TARGET For SHELLZ n BULLETS--
When It Rainz!
1st)i Listed Already 4 Wayz To Die,N continue SQUEEZIN one More In The Sentence (PARTICIPATE IN GANGS)<gets You Killed
2nd)One Day You IS KOOL with Ya Hoeboys,Next Day Your A TARGET For SHELLZ n BULLETS!N When i Say When It "Rainz" i Mean BULLETS Comin From EVERYWHERE like Raindrops!
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Well I EXPLAINED the Lil verse N Shyt so leave Some Feed N Holla BAck!
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aight i like the whole concept of the piece not enough of vocabulary used try to work on that so the piece can seem a little more intellectual u kno and the piece was madd good man keep it up i liked the flow of it and this line was good man really felt it
"Dyin Of An OVERDOSE Is Something Thats Common IN This World (2)
People Cant Get Enough POPPIN PILLZ,So Godz Workin On a New REFERRAL"

so in overall nice work here in this piece man keep up the good work man 1

this was ok except your explanation was twice as long as your piece. work on makin it so you dont have to explain everything on there so it can b understood by the majority of peeps. holla at me about doin an open mic, im lookin for peeps...1..

LoL thanx for da FB homiez!N Yo hitchcock i barely finished one Collab With STANZA go Peep!N Im workin On oNe right Now with DAUBZ n KHAOZ!but PM if ya still lookin 4 peepz for that Open Mic!N Yo PEN n PAPER lol Homie this aint shyt cuz!this iz just BASIC shyt i spit on a daily basis!LoL If ya wanna see VOCAB go peep My COLLAB with STANZA!N HOLLA BACK!

shit that was a tight rap

tight flow, structure, vocab, multi's, Worldplay, Crativity, opening, closing
9/10 cuz of the explanations... good rap homie

RTF plz

Good structure.....vocab on top....multies all that...cant be mad...apart from ure explanation was rrlly long...but apart from that good shit 8/10