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06-07-05, 05:47 PM
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Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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Everything Average
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EVERYTHING AVERAGE
This world is all the same it always has a ritual To maintain our everyday life is all just typical Our visions sees everything the same, nothing too spectacular Everything forms into the same thing, life is nothing regular Just the illuminations, We stay in the position we go through and follow our footsteps It’s wrong to turn back and turn bad we must follow the good steps Everything just seems average nothing outstanding All we look forward its what we want demanding Just the stairs, This is just an average life everything the same Nothing in our powers can do to help it change There’s always an average up and an average down Everything that we live for is what happens now Just the similar, The average color is always dull no color to be seen Stays that way just so it can look dreadful and mean Usually there’s something that makes life un-normal Everybody is uptight down right to the done formal; Just the clothes, We stay with a good capture of our everyday life Like a picture in our mind we don’t forget the time We close the brain and just unwind the rolls of negatives Capture the portrait into a canvas and see nothing shifts Just the enlargement, Everything is mediocre we stay adequate but not good Everything in life must stay the same I wish it just could Change so we can live our own life and not be controlled like a puppet We get thrown away like garbage in the dumpster all we do is dump it Just the trash, So we keep the changes to ourselves so it can’t be removed or altered We live by the same failures but do we live by the faulted
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  STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
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06-07-05, 05:48 PM
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Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP:
Links-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=154818 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193914
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
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06-07-05, 09:25 PM
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Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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uppin cmon pplz askin for more feed aight stop sleepin
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
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06-08-05, 07:00 AM
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Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP:
uppin this plz leave feed
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
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06-08-05, 05:53 PM
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Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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yo uppin this man plz leave feedback ok pplz cmon stop sleepin
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
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06-09-05, 01:39 PM
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Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP:
nobody leaves feed uppin this again for feedback
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
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06-09-05, 02:32 PM
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Light Weight
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This piece was good, vocab was on point, started it off and ended it strong, and the imagery was decent, some lines was a little stretched out though
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06-09-05, 03:19 PM
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~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
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IP:
This Was nice Famz!Nice Structure VOCAB was good Was Really Feelin It Homie Honestly!keep it up n my overall ( 8/10 ) Holla ATcha Boy!
RTF PLEAZ IN MY NEW OM  Many Wayz Too Die) LINK BELOW
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"This Worlds A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits"-Gh0st-
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06-09-05, 04:10 PM
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Just searching.
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IP:
Check out my battle against him, then...
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06-09-05, 06:29 PM
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Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP:
^^yea thnx for the comments finally i got sum ppl to check them out
and kein thats a good way for pplz to get the votin on the battle lol yea ill rtf in time ok thnx yall
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
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06-10-05, 08:10 AM
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Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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ok uppin this for more feed lets go pplz cmon feed aight
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
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06-12-05, 10:33 AM
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Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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upppin for more feed plz thnx in advance
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
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06-12-05, 07:34 PM
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Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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cmon pplz lets get some more feedback aight yall
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
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06-13-05, 11:07 AM
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Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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uppin this let gets sum more feedback on this aight
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
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06-14-05, 12:17 PM
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Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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cmon peeps check this out and leave feed o it aight
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
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