Dont Look Down ft.3rd Infintry
 

yo peep this track!!...eney feedback would be much appreciated, drop links!!

some shit 3rd Infintry had they sent me before, figured to drop a verse on it..Im the 3rd Verse!

www.soundclick.com/kaveh7
"Dont Look Down ft.3rd Infintry"

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=2535315&q=Lo
http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=2535315&q=Hi
http://www.soundclick.com/util/down....cfm?ID=2535315
Lyrics (My Verse) http://www.soundclick.com/bands/Lyr...&songid=2535315


Links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195113
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2216255

listenin...

1st cat has some real nice lyrics...damn his verse was perfect for this typa track props to him...i aint really feelin the chorus...shits alil weak from my point a view ..2nd cat real nice as well...real nice voice too...humm these cats can spit smooth im feelin that...na'mean fuck ups ruin songs and so far they doin they thing...iight 3rd cat comin im guessin this you...ok right off the back honestly the emotion you picked wasnt so good man sounds like ya cryin na'mean?...but lyrics is real good flow was on point but wasnt choppin as well as the other cats well i'll rate this a honest 8.5/10 iight son keep'em comin 1ne..

no doubt, thanks for the feed man!

uppin..........

still uppin....

peepin... first dude is nyce... a good matured voice... good lyrics and rime scheme sample on tha hook is real nyce... emotional joint... 2nd dude is real tite.... im feelin his flow n voice... i beleive in u come on keep ya head up... i like that last line... man, if u still got this with tha third verse open u should send it too me lol... waitin for ur part... ya quality isnt tha same as theirs... vocals low... im likein how ya talkin bout ya daughter... respectable.. i didnt get to keep my son... yo.. if u have this beat i want it... ferrealll.. pleeeez find this beat for me...

word, thanks for the feed!

dont like havin to wait to the third verse cuz this is some hippy shit... i dont like ya emotion on this song but u had good lyrics and decent flow u just dont really sound that good after hearin the first two and how they emotion was on point for the song... decent drop just need different emotion so u dont sound like u did...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195648
^^ return feed

no doubt, thanks for peepin.. i got the link when i get home