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06-18-05, 12:53 AM | #1 | |||||||
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PP2- when i roll up
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all me...
did it in like 2 hours time and freestyled the whole second half but tell me what ya'll think. link VVV http://www.soundclick.com/pictureperfect2pac
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06-18-05, 01:26 AM | #2 | |||||||
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06-19-05, 10:45 PM | #3 | |||||||
Light Weight
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returnin the favor:
beat is coo, basic kinda emotion and delivery starts very low, wasnt feelin it too much..need to work on that lyrics were nice flow was coo, but the delivery and emotion needs to be upped hook was fine, but needs more hype also keep droppin
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06-23-05, 12:38 AM | #4 | |||||||
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^^^ ya its just like a chill song so i used my chill emotion, haha... thx for the feed
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06-23-05, 07:42 AM | #5 | |||
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vocals need better editing...maybe take the bass out
beat is fine flow is pretty decent not bad 1 |
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