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TeamOne 06-19-05 03:31 AM

A Burden
 
THANK GOD I FOUND A WAY TO RECORD........ i got my sis's laptop and dled the most bootlegg software possible.... i couldnt even change volume levels if i wanted too, so fuck mixin, lol...... this track is about where rap is and is headed and shit like that..... i think alotta my track would look better in text cuz theres some sorta hidden wordplay..... so if u hear a real dumb line... ur prolly missin sumthin.... didnt take me long to write and record..... ofcourse all new material since i lost my rhyme book :( .... so if u take out quality, tell me wat ya think

2 verses, NO hook......... and YES, i know its 30 seconds before i come in, be patient i needa get a hook

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/o...namesgalant.htm

I left feed on AI mixtape and New Method Bday song! enjoy :thumbup:

TeamOne 06-19-05 04:11 PM

woah, im feelin all the love......... thanx guys... :thumbup:

Dizzee Rascal 06-19-05 04:20 PM

Ok,
Beat was tight
Delivery was good, flow was smooth fru out

Lyrics were coo
Actually delivery was really good
mic quality isnt gr8 tho

Return favour plz

TeamOne 06-19-05 09:50 PM

thanx, link?????????????????????????

Dizzee Rascal 06-20-05 06:05 AM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195959 cheers

TeamOne 06-20-05 11:01 AM

ok, wtf is wrong with my comp......... sorry i posted sumthin wrong in this forum

TeamOne 06-22-05 01:20 AM

i guess its aight im not gettin any feed right now........ ill be postin a full track with sumone else featured on it pretty soon.... i guess ull have to peep and see to find out the special guest

Speats 06-23-05 04:44 PM

Beat: i dont really like it
Lyrics: pretty good
Quality: not bad
Intro: i like the intro
Flow: dope
overall: not bad...i dont really like it but its dope for that kinda track


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