Psshh i left feed to fuxjustaword and Akademix and u closed my last 1

Anyway


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Please leave feed, im 3rd on the track

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ok wtf, i wrote feed for ur track twice already and both times it didnt show up wen i posted so ill break it down alot shorter....... the firstg guy shined the most on this track and really has nuthin to wrok on except gettin better lyrically (but everyone always needs that), the guy doin the hook made the track worse in my opinion.... he mumbled, the lyrics werent that great and his rhymin was kinda off..... the third guy was decent, alot better than the hook, but he didnt outshine the first guy... just get ur quality alil up on this verse, a better flow and presence, and itll be just as good as the first verse...... pc

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Nice looking respect

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Where is the lvoe?

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intro not feeln it, 1st dude average flow, upp the lyrics and vocab doe. quialty isnt too good. I dont really like your voice, but dat could be cuz quailty distorts it idk..
do dubs and adlibs next time.
chorus is horrbile. a dude talking/mummbling.
dubs were off on his lol
damn dat hurts
2nd dude, not a fan of the voice or accent. quailty a lil better
sounds like he reading
flow needs work, delevery needs to be changed up a lil

not too bad for RV, up the quailty doe would make it better

5/10
chorus messed up any hope kinda..
no hate
holla atcha boi

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