Brothers (Chapter-One)
 

Wall Street aka Animosity= purple and Symbol= black

12:00 Am.....Nine-Teen-Ninety-One Symbol Was Conceived
Kind Of Hard Looking Back He In Coma And Only Thirteen
This Is A Big Problem To Cure.. It'll Take More Then Aleve
Eye Witnesses It, So On There Count Aint Shit Bin Achieved
Looking Down On My Bro Symbol, Like This A Movie Scene
Waiting In The Hospital With Him Like It's A Moving Dream
Nightmares Hound My Dreams, Just Watching Symbol Sleep
Wondering Is He Aiight.. Or Was He A Victim Of The Street
Can't Sleep Can't Shower, I'm With Him For Weeks Straight
Sitting In The Hospital Chair Hoping & Praying He Awakes
My Head Throbs With Thoughts, Wondering If He Makes It
Where's God On This One,Blood In His Mouth I Can Taste It
Images Racing, Chest Aching,I'm Waiting For A Sign Of Life
I'm Living For My Brother Now.. And Putting Aside My Wife
Looking Back To Every Sec Before They Pulled The Trigger
Without Him It'll Be Different.. Like A Light With No Flicker
Posted on the block just talkin to my bro Wall Street
All tired…Symptoms I see, I need sleep, all weak
All bored, I see an accord and a ford slowly roll by
Tinted on all four, slowing down…thinkin I ask why
Now right in front of us…on stand by, I hang tight
Windows rolling down I see the middle finger hands high
Fuck hang tight, gun shot loose while Wall Street ran right
Shot at the back trice, it was like if I was banned from life
It’s like in a coma…I can hear all those sittin by my side
Holding for my bear life, it’s just hard to survive
The voice of my bro, praying to God I won’t die
At the same time, for him it’s hard to put aside his wife
Now in my dream, I see, the better future in me
That I would grow up to be, someone past the age of 13
I’m afraid of change, but it’s never too late
A twitch…a wink, noticing that I’ll soon be awake

Looking Back It's Crazy I Still Remember~The~Date
Two-Thousand-And-Four... On December~The~Eight
Whenever-It-Breaks Out,... I Know He'll Get~Nervous
Cause I Felt Is Pain In ICU Like God Left~His~Service
And I Know Looking Back It's Hard To Believe~It~Man
But When He Catches Flashes I'm Like Breath~In~Fam
Weird...Through Everything I Stuck With Em All~Night
While Our Moms And Pops...... Didn't Even Call~Twice
A year later now posted on the same ol’ block
Those close to me knows my life is far from a stop
But I still look back at, the tragedy that happened to me
Changed the way I live like a players strategy
Still walkin on both feet, not paralyzed yet it shows me
I have my whole life ahead of me to walk on 3 feet
Karma…what goes around comes around you see
So I guess that goes to the punk ass bitch that did this to me

links to open mics i left feed back on:

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2265211

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2265213

The thing that stands out to me the most on this peice was the imagery it is pure SWEETNESS....there are nothing but good things to say about this.....just damn one of the best open mics i have read keep em comin yall......10/10

i was feeling trhis peice.... loved the story and the two voices the two brothers shit was dope, i thought symbols verse was better in the imaginary catagory but wall street your verse was fiyer man, keep droppin em you 2 pz

if ya want ya can nominate this best open mic :thumbup:

uppin for real yo this is a masterpiece

Shit was dopeness manye
fellin dis whole piece
i give it a 10/10

Looking Down On My Bro Symbol, Like This A Movie Scene
Waiting In The Hospital With Him Like It's A Moving Dream
Nightmares Hound My Dreams, Just Watching Symbol Sleep
Wondering Is He Aiight.. Or Was He A Victim Of The Street

^poeticalnessismful in there,the 1st bar i that stanza is the dopest tho.


Windows rolling down I see the middle finger hands high
Fuck hang tight, gun shot loose while Wall Street ran right

^hella energy in that line,reminded me of one mic when nas get all hype


I liked this alot.But I'ma grab compose or fux and son you both :)


good job.

yeah this was pretty dope nice imagery of the whole brother concept...kinda reminds me of the open mic me and parallel did called Like Brotherz...good drop...~1~