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Brothers (Chapter-One)
IP: 00A2 4ED0
Wall Street aka Animosity= purple and Symbol= black
12:00 Am.....Nine-Teen-Ninety-One Symbol Was Conceived Kind Of Hard Looking Back He In Coma And Only Thirteen This Is A Big Problem To Cure.. It'll Take More Then Aleve Eye Witnesses It, So On There Count Aint Shit Bin Achieved Looking Down On My Bro Symbol, Like This A Movie Scene Waiting In The Hospital With Him Like It's A Moving Dream Nightmares Hound My Dreams, Just Watching Symbol Sleep Wondering Is He Aiight.. Or Was He A Victim Of The Street Can't Sleep Can't Shower, I'm With Him For Weeks Straight Sitting In The Hospital Chair Hoping & Praying He Awakes My Head Throbs With Thoughts, Wondering If He Makes It Where's God On This One,Blood In His Mouth I Can Taste It Images Racing, Chest Aching,I'm Waiting For A Sign Of Life I'm Living For My Brother Now.. And Putting Aside My Wife Looking Back To Every Sec Before They Pulled The Trigger Without Him It'll Be Different.. Like A Light With No Flicker Posted on the block just talkin to my bro Wall Street All tired…Symptoms I see, I need sleep, all weak All bored, I see an accord and a ford slowly roll by Tinted on all four, slowing down…thinkin I ask why Now right in front of us…on stand by, I hang tight Windows rolling down I see the middle finger hands high Fuck hang tight, gun shot loose while Wall Street ran right Shot at the back trice, it was like if I was banned from life It’s like in a coma…I can hear all those sittin by my side Holding for my bear life, it’s just hard to survive The voice of my bro, praying to God I won’t die At the same time, for him it’s hard to put aside his wife Now in my dream, I see, the better future in me That I would grow up to be, someone past the age of 13 I’m afraid of change, but it’s never too late A twitch…a wink, noticing that I’ll soon be awake Looking Back It's Crazy I Still Remember~The~Date Two-Thousand-And-Four... On December~The~Eight Whenever-It-Breaks Out,... I Know He'll Get~Nervous Cause I Felt Is Pain In ICU Like God Left~His~Service And I Know Looking Back It's Hard To Believe~It~Man But When He Catches Flashes I'm Like Breath~In~Fam Weird...Through Everything I Stuck With Em All~Night While Our Moms And Pops...... Didn't Even Call~Twice A year later now posted on the same ol’ block Those close to me knows my life is far from a stop But I still look back at, the tragedy that happened to me Changed the way I live like a players strategy Still walkin on both feet, not paralyzed yet it shows me I have my whole life ahead of me to walk on 3 feet Karma…what goes around comes around you see So I guess that goes to the punk ass bitch that did this to me Last edited by Symbol : 07-05-05 at 04:57 AM. |
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IP: 00A2 4ED0
links to open mics i left feed back on:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2265211 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2265213 |
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IP: 8D90 9AAC
The thing that stands out to me the most on this peice was the imagery it is pure SWEETNESS....there are nothing but good things to say about this.....just damn one of the best open mics i have read keep em comin yall......10/10
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 2029 97B3
Thank You THank You Thank You, Your Far To Kind
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Evolution
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IP: 0DD2 7DAA
i was feeling trhis peice.... loved the story and the two voices the two brothers shit was dope, i thought symbols verse was better in the imaginary catagory but wall street your verse was fiyer man, keep droppin em you 2 pz
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 2029 97B3
Dope Thanks Man Muahaha Holla
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QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
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IP: 00A2 4ED0
if ya want ya can nominate this best open mic
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QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
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IP: 00A2 4ED0
uppin for real yo this is a masterpiece
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 2029 97B3
Master Piece Nigga, lols
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IP: C746 CB1A
Shit was dopeness manye
fellin dis whole piece i give it a 10/10
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Not_Indeph
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IP: 28AD 5545
Looking Down On My Bro Symbol, Like This A Movie Scene
Waiting In The Hospital With Him Like It's A Moving Dream Nightmares Hound My Dreams, Just Watching Symbol Sleep Wondering Is He Aiight.. Or Was He A Victim Of The Street ^poeticalnessismful in there,the 1st bar i that stanza is the dopest tho. Windows rolling down I see the middle finger hands high Fuck hang tight, gun shot loose while Wall Street ran right ^hella energy in that line,reminded me of one mic when nas get all hype I liked this alot.But I'ma grab compose or fux and son you both ![]() good job. |
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IP: 2029 97B3
Dope Man Thanks Muahahha
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The Rise
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IP: EDEB 1F20
yeah this was pretty dope nice imagery of the whole brother concept...kinda reminds me of the open mic me and parallel did called Like Brotherz...good drop...~1~
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This is my first post!
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IP: 2029 97B3
Thanks Man Holla
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