Fuck You
 

Talkin: Basically a lil background info i was at school...this white guy took the piss outta my color...he was racist...and basically made everyone laught even the teacher...i was the only black person in the class...i wil not refer to racism in the verse because i feel its not appropiate...its gone past that..I did this in 5 mins

"Fuck You...This is to them haters"

Yo let my anger be my pen and write on this page,
Let my humiliated soul leak with hatrid and rage,
Yo you need an in-home pastor, let alone a prayer,
The way u actin, the future will see ure long awaited failure,
Sarcasm is the lowest form of wit, Did ya know that,
So Im jus gon say it...FUCK YOU, Did ya hear that,
If I cut open youre head, you would find no brain,
If I asked u 2 write dwn ure age, ud probs write dwn ure name,
Oh hes a class joker!....Jus one of em who seeks attention,
Im at the top...look at this...the bitch in....detention,
But he think it cool...but now where are his friends,
The ones that laugh with him, and constantly bends,
They left him stranded, payin for his mistakes,
Now he all alone, then now comes the plagues,
Of the karma wind, twirling round his guilty face,
Has he learnt his mufuckin lesson...is he in his place
Nah he aint, its jus another day, in the life of this wannabe,
One day hell pay, maybe today, but I dont wanna be,
The one to do the dirty work, because thats not what I do,
What? bitch, now you want my help, who the fuck are you?
Tryin to diss me, than need me, now you gettin whipped,
He got no more shit to say as the pool of blood is evidence he dripped,
Hes one of em who thinks he gangsta with one of em crip rags,
But really come from a rich area but now Im gonna make him piss in em black bags,
You used to be my homie, my dogg, we were always kool,
But since this moment.....FUCK YOU.... JUS FUCK YOU

Yeah I know....thanks uppin

why would u think this will get replys for??

i bet 90 precent is white...
the other 5 is black
the other 5 is spanish...

this will get basicly no replys that are good MAYBE 1 or 2...

hey i'm white, and i agree, there's no room in this world for racism of any kind, i never get why people act that way....but anyways everything in this was good, keep it up man

Thank you...yo criminaly jus because Im black and sum1 else is white doesnt mean they will disagree with this...

werd, nice peice here dawg!! flowed well, great concept and ideas!!! great peice, keep it up dawg!
uppin for ma home boi!

Yo I'm white, I hate Racisim as well.. But this was a good Piece.. I liked the Emotion in your words.. You can really feel what your trying to portry.. Nice Job wit that.. Structure was on point as well as the Flow.. Overall a Good Piece.. 8.5/10

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good post

racism does exist, just like the air

you dont see it, but its there

nice way to vent your frustrations..cool post

Thanks everyone...I will RTF in a min

no need homie, just keep ya head up

and promice to see me in a battle soon

Yeah no doubt.....uppin

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damn homeboy sorry 2 hear diz but i can't understand y u didn't respond 2 diz problem but i like how u went into depth, imagery was very vivid, structure was nice, vocab on point...keep writing fa sho playa 1 luv, 1 thug