Everyones Got dreams, Mine are Usually wet and Full wit Cream
Fuck Life, I follow the Killers Protocol, with this Nine and Knife.
I'll take this Fight Back Old School, with Tomahawks, and slinging Rocks
smash and gash yah, till yah cant read or walk
See mylife is a little like pacs, I carry around my own piece of chalk
See unlike most, I like being Locked in a cell
I'm just a white male, Looking For a passage to Jail
A Place where i can be me, Kill for free, and get dealt a great meal
Half the shit i say aint real, Its just how i feel
I've had enough of this Rapping, Hip-Hop Yah dont Stop Pop
Just Gimmie Mya, as well as Shania, and i'll gladly stop
See i'm Easy On the ordinary MC Cause when it comes to me
There a X on this scale of A to Z.
I Try to Rap Political but i'm to sinical, I try to write rap about Life
But everytime i sit down to write, all i can think about is fucking your wife
with her Mouth Muffled, and carving her throat with this Knife


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werd good shit here weird but not bad thought u didnt text doe dogg anyway 7/10 keep dropin

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It's Murdah now, not murder.

Wine is treasure when I rhyme for pleasure please pass
The glass got the room alarmed with Boone farm fast
See a hot honey and she’s not for money just a fine ass
Sweaty and unique ready to compete for a tonguing kiss
I’m clearly thug but nearly in love this is merely a club twist
If Her coo-chee real juicy let it spill need energetic skills
In rap want her to chill in my lap in bed never regret it, will
She let buy drinks? I try think

^^^ WTF.... Anyway... Looking for some Feed..

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Yo this is something I dont normally see...but good orgiinality...good flow...wud be a gd audio..7/10

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i would like to hear dis right here, nice shit...6.5/10 cuz i cant match a beat to i but its still good...wun

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Everyones Got dreams, Mine are Usually wet and Full wit Cream

that means your ass needs to get laid.

this was cool you had a nice flow i like how you switched but kept the flow. lyrics were kinda blah

yea mayne i like it, tha vocab, originality, concept was on point very good shit but like intermental it would probably sound alot betta audio...tha only flaw 2 me was ur structure but it probably flows betta 2getha like dat when u rhyme it keep writing fa sho

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Word.. Fam.. uppin ...................

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this was good vocab and structure errythang was well in place good dropp

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