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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/straightaim_music.htm

Some deep shit i wrote and put down on the mic...yes it is me on the mic and im not that good yet but im atleast decent..so give it a chance...and type feedback so i can elevate..and be honest..if u liked it say so..if u hated it say so..type whateva u seriously thought bout it and i'll RTF unless u are RTF

here's my linkz
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=198499
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=198524

i like this beat...CORNERS


ur vocal quality is lacking, as well as your flow...it sounds like you were talking to yourself

where are u from?


not really feelin this

elevate dawg

:cussing: jesus.... :banghead:...i aint beefin or mad at ya but i just frustrated of hearin that :cussing: am i supposed ta sing it out and be a backstreeet boy bout it :cussing:

well ur getting better than before, quality is much better, now work on ur voice, like u seem like talking, mmm chorus...i had prob to realise what was what, put more emotions!!! lol anyway ur elevated

thanks for the feed people....uppin

there the link should be workin now

*listening*

good beat....

your flow is gettin better...still not were it needs to be...cause it still sounds like your kinda talkin to yourself.....but it is gettin better than what it was.....

lyrics are pretty good...but you gotta get more into it and show more emotion....dont just rap into the mic...you gotta feel yourself...

quality isnt too good...but its ok....you also gotta work on your voice some...but that comes after gettin your flow down n everything....just keep workin

uppin.............