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Shine Dope 07-08-05 03:54 AM

check it out
 
Ok somebody roll up a chocalate
i gotta lotta bad habits gotta stop it
if i need money then u better watch ya pockets
wear so much black u might even think im gothic
sorry that just what im flossin often
wardrobe be costin night or morning
and im not sayin that makes me important
ya u know im smokin but at least i aint snortin
i rock forces cuz i dont like jordans
aint from georgia but i got my hoyas
i call orders i dont need no lawyer
got beef wit da boy u gon sleep in the soil

Formation 07-08-05 04:41 AM

Leave links But
AIight Man Flow Was Cool Vocabulary Was Basic Though So Try And Fix That Rhmye Scheme Fiz That Too Structre Was Okay For A newb Try And line Up The lines Man

Princess14 07-08-05 04:43 AM

Good I think it's good!

Shine Dope 07-08-05 04:48 AM

Fuck animosity i might be new but ill cut u up ya rhymes aint shit bitch

Formation 07-08-05 04:51 AM

^See What Happens When You Give Some Real Feed Man


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