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Old 07-08-05, 03:54 AM   #1
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Ok somebody roll up a chocalate
i gotta lotta bad habits gotta stop it
if i need money then u better watch ya pockets
wear so much black u might even think im gothic
sorry that just what im flossin often
wardrobe be costin night or morning
and im not sayin that makes me important
ya u know im smokin but at least i aint snortin
i rock forces cuz i dont like jordans
aint from georgia but i got my hoyas
i call orders i dont need no lawyer
got beef wit da boy u gon sleep in the soil
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"and i dont wanna see none of my people hurt or murdered it aint worth it i cant think of a better way to word it then to just say that i love yall to much to reach the verdict so ima walkaway before it goes any further and no dont get it twisted its not a plea that im coppin im just willin to be the bigger man if yall could quit poppin off at the jaws wit the knockin cuz frankly im sick of talkin and im not gonna let someone elses coffin rest on my conscious"

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Old 07-08-05, 04:41 AM   #2
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Leave links But
AIight Man Flow Was Cool Vocabulary Was Basic Though So Try And Fix That Rhmye Scheme Fiz That Too Structre Was Okay For A newb Try And line Up The lines Man
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Old 07-08-05, 04:43 AM   #3
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Good I think it's good!
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Old 07-08-05, 04:48 AM   #4
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Fuck animosity i might be new but ill cut u up ya rhymes aint shit bitch
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"and i dont wanna see none of my people hurt or murdered it aint worth it i cant think of a better way to word it then to just say that i love yall to much to reach the verdict so ima walkaway before it goes any further and no dont get it twisted its not a plea that im coppin im just willin to be the bigger man if yall could quit poppin off at the jaws wit the knockin cuz frankly im sick of talkin and im not gonna let someone elses coffin rest on my conscious"

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Old 07-08-05, 04:51 AM   #5
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