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MiddleWeight Title: {Propain} (5-0) vs. Pen N' Paper (3-2)
Battles up Monday - Check In by Wednesday - Drop by Friday - Votes by Sunday
No line limit and the battler with most votes by Sunday night is the winner. If this is a topical battle, write a topical and not a poetic drop and the same is vice a versa. Extensions must be asked for by Thursday night by pming any of the mods (Drakel or Drama Queen). No extensions will be given if asked on Friday night. Extensions are only given till Sunday night at the most. If you dont ask for an extension, and drop whenever you feel like it you will be disqualified. Do not abuse extentions, they are not to be used if you're just too lazy to drop within the confines of the circumstances. Leave reasonable explanation for your absence. If the League notices you are a slacker due to this nature you will be banned for being out-right slothfully callous. Don't ho-show because you will be banned if you do it twice. We can understand you cannot drop due to certain circumstances but if this happens a second time, you're banned from the league for 2 weeks. If you signed up for both leagues and you no-show in one league twice, you will be banned in both leagues! Try to limit the freeposts, we will have a chat/beef thread for that. Also give fully explained votes, if not your votes won't count! New rule: first to get 3 votes wins If you dislike the topic, you have to contact your opponent and agree on a different one MiddleWeight Title Battle - {Propain} is the defending MiddleWeight Champ  Your Topic: Devil's Advocate |
...Check in.....
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Checky.........lol.........g/l propain......1
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Walking To Destiny Desending the stairs of hell, my heart beats Rapidly Thinking of my sins of voilence and Blasphemy Demons Trapped In Me, and I feel them Scratch At Me Claws tear through my internal emotions, sharp like Hatchets See The heat touches my face and I can Feel The Burning I walk down the final few steps and think of my wasted life of Killed Off Earnings Walking down a pathway in the Heated Depths Souls start to fade from earth and end up Deleted Deaths Blood drips from my Bleeding Chest, and as I walk closer to the Advocate My soul begins to rott with scrotching fire Attacking It As I stand behind the distorted vision of heat all I can see is a Blurred Figure And the red glow of its shadow is to show pain for Sure Deliver I Feel the Burns Bigger, and sounds of screaming agony Surrounded Me As I look off into the flames the amount of screaming corpses Astounded Me After all I had done in life nothign ever Amounted See Moving slowly, the hot force seemed to be Grounding Me Making my way to the Devils Helper, I Crawled In Pain Memories eaten and my body slowly Nawed Away Seeing the advocate in full form, finally I Arrived Life had finished long ago and all hope Had Died Without a word and with red glowing eyes and darks lips he Seemed To Say Let your vengence burn in the heat and your soul Redeem This Day |
. . . Fiery intense of burning ambition… took place inside One of the darkest places that would be too scared to hide Closely the beast breathing behind… Goosebumps in fear It was so clear… the bad breath of raw eggs seem to appear In a dark rock volcanoes explode more often time goes slow Stuck wit melting shoes… can’t escape the bright red glow Dark and evil… similar to what psycho’s like in they life Knife cut so swiftly through the flesh to begin his strife . . . The sky turns red… blue isn’t no more as they start to arrive People on earth die escaping through, trying just to survive Then something happens it rains… god tears fall from the air Still no one cares the repercussions its nothing as fire flares Suicidal news cutting veins, carbon monoxide, and they hung Breathing too hard… these things we cant see to feel in lungs Too much of it makes us insane… we cant handle when we work They losing all their energy in speaking they starting to go berserk . . . As he end is coming so soon we don’t see it…but its in minutes We’ll see all the corruptions wounded and deaths we see in clinics So vital and futile we see it in our pupils its just a contaminated disease We cant take the pain so we fall down… and some land on their knees The evil makes his hand so stiff… bloody fingers and turns into a fist Secretly and discretely hides the wrongs and decides to burn the list As hell breaks through our mind… and in the sky heaven opens the gates We try to deny it but really we kno that we are all the Devil’s Advocate . . . |
ight this was a dope battle i enjoyed reading both verses...
propain: your imagination and vocab are always dope man thats whay i like about your verse, your content that you put in em makes them stand out... your flow was on point through it and i get a certain viobe of reading it.... i was feeling this alot,. you had a good understanding of the topic and went deep into it, good job fam.... pen n' paper: ight i didnt think you were this good at topicals you surpised me wit this... vocab was good but not as good as propians... your undrstanding of the topic was nice... it was a nice peice but i felt that there was somthing missin. the flow was good... but i felt your imagination couldav been better and your emotion aswell... v/ propain he had a more fuller verse more enjoyable and more emotion dope battle props to both... pz |
Uppin for more votes
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propain....decent flow to your piece, a nice topic that you got creative with and approached it nice and brought a real good delivery. the vocabs were there but not 100% consistent, cud be a little better in that area, imagery was nice, a lot of feeling in your piece which i like rather than these 2-dimensional pieces some ppl drop
pen 'n' paper....a lot better from you, the best i've seen you do, a good approach and good delivery, flow was on point and you stayed on topic from start to finish, like propain you had some nice imagery and feeling but i feel you were a little too basic with your vocabs, try more complex shit in your drops and you will win a lot V/ - Propain |
aight then damn.....but it was a good battle too then its 2-0 propain this guy is good shit......lol
uppin for more votes..... |
ohh and i dont want anyone from RAW or WAR crew votes in here.....thnx.......
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^^ Ur a incestrious herb :)
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ur the herb aight yall jsut hate bitch^^^^^
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How abotu instead of coming in here and jumping peoples nuts you drop a vote?
Uppin |
Propain:
Fucking dope man...Imagery was amazing, you did a fantastic job with this topic...Emotion was outstanding, you explained everything soo perfect and made me feel every sentence..Vocab was good, coulda been upped a tad, but overall, really nice verse man. Pen N' Paper: Good verse from you as well...You had the imagery, vocab, emotion, flow...Everything you needed, but you were just outdone on this battle dawg. V/ {Propain} |
Aight 3-0, KO..good shit.
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