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Old 07-11-05, 05:47 AM   #1
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MiddleWeight Title: {Propain} (5-0) vs. Pen N' Paper (3-2)

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No line limit and the battler with most votes by Sunday night is the winner. If this is a topical battle, write a topical and not a poetic drop and the same is vice a versa.

Extensions must be asked for by Thursday night by pming any of the mods (Drakel or Drama Queen). No extensions will be given if asked on Friday night. Extensions are only given till Sunday night at the most. If you dont ask for an extension, and drop whenever you feel like it you will be disqualified. Do not abuse extentions, they are not to be used if you're just too lazy to drop within the confines of the circumstances. Leave reasonable explanation for your absence. If the League notices you are a slacker due to this nature you will be banned for being out-right slothfully callous.

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MiddleWeight Title Battle - {Propain} is the defending MiddleWeight Champ


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Devil's Advocate
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Old 07-11-05, 08:24 AM   #2
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...Check in.....
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Old 07-11-05, 08:38 AM   #3
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Checky.........lol.........g/l propain......1
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Old 07-13-05, 07:03 AM   #4
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Walking To Destiny


Desending the stairs of hell, my heart beats Rapidly
Thinking of my sins of voilence and Blasphemy
Demons Trapped In Me, and I feel them Scratch At Me
Claws tear through my internal emotions, sharp like Hatchets See
The heat touches my face and I can Feel The Burning
I walk down the final few steps and think of my wasted life of Killed Off Earnings
Walking down a pathway in the Heated Depths
Souls start to fade from earth and end up Deleted Deaths
Blood drips from my Bleeding Chest, and as I walk closer to the Advocate
My soul begins to rott with scrotching fire Attacking It
As I stand behind the distorted vision of heat all I can see is a Blurred Figure
And the red glow of its shadow is to show pain for Sure Deliver
I Feel the Burns Bigger, and sounds of screaming agony Surrounded Me
As I look off into the flames the amount of screaming corpses Astounded Me
After all I had done in life nothign ever Amounted See
Moving slowly, the hot force seemed to be Grounding Me
Making my way to the Devils Helper, I Crawled In Pain
Memories eaten and my body slowly Nawed Away
Seeing the advocate in full form, finally I Arrived
Life had finished long ago and all hope Had Died
Without a word and with red glowing eyes and darks lips he Seemed To Say
Let your vengence burn in the heat and your soul Redeem This Day
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Old 07-14-05, 09:36 AM   #5
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Fiery intense of burning ambition… took place inside
One of the darkest places that would be too scared to hide
Closely the beast breathing behind… Goosebumps in fear
It was so clear… the bad breath of raw eggs seem to appear
In a dark rock volcanoes explode more often time goes slow
Stuck wit melting shoes… can’t escape the bright red glow
Dark and evil… similar to what psycho’s like in they life
Knife cut so swiftly through the flesh to begin his strife
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The sky turns red… blue isn’t no more as they start to arrive
People on earth die escaping through, trying just to survive
Then something happens it rains… god tears fall from the air
Still no one cares the repercussions its nothing as fire flares
Suicidal news cutting veins, carbon monoxide, and they hung
Breathing too hard… these things we cant see to feel in lungs
Too much of it makes us insane… we cant handle when we work
They losing all their energy in speaking they starting to go berserk
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As he end is coming so soon we don’t see it…but its in minutes
We’ll see all the corruptions wounded and deaths we see in clinics
So vital and futile we see it in our pupils its just a contaminated disease
We cant take the pain so we fall down… and some land on their knees
The evil makes his hand so stiff… bloody fingers and turns into a fist
Secretly and discretely hides the wrongs and decides to burn the list
As hell breaks through our mind… and in the sky heaven opens the gates
We try to deny it but really we kno that we are all the Devil’s Advocate
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Old 07-14-05, 10:21 AM   #6
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ight this was a dope battle i enjoyed reading both verses...

propain: your imagination and vocab are always dope man thats whay i like about your verse, your content that you put in em makes them stand out... your flow was on point through it and i get a certain viobe of reading it.... i was feeling this alot,. you had a good understanding of the topic and went deep into it, good job fam....


pen n' paper: ight i didnt think you were this good at topicals you surpised me wit this... vocab was good but not as good as propians... your undrstanding of the topic was nice... it was a nice peice but i felt that there was somthing missin. the flow was good... but i felt your imagination couldav been better and your emotion aswell...

v/ propain

he had a more fuller verse more enjoyable and more emotion


dope battle props to both... pz
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Old 07-15-05, 09:53 AM   #7
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Uppin for more votes
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Old 07-16-05, 05:52 PM   #8
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propain....decent flow to your piece, a nice topic that you got creative with and approached it nice and brought a real good delivery. the vocabs were there but not 100% consistent, cud be a little better in that area, imagery was nice, a lot of feeling in your piece which i like rather than these 2-dimensional pieces some ppl drop

pen 'n' paper....a lot better from you, the best i've seen you do, a good approach and good delivery, flow was on point and you stayed on topic from start to finish, like propain you had some nice imagery and feeling but i feel you were a little too basic with your vocabs, try more complex shit in your drops and you will win a lot

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Old 07-16-05, 06:00 PM   #9
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aight then damn.....but it was a good battle too then its 2-0 propain this guy is good shit......lol

uppin for more votes.....
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Old 07-16-05, 06:28 PM   #10
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ohh and i dont want anyone from RAW or WAR crew votes in here.....thnx.......
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Old 07-17-05, 05:22 AM   #11
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Old 07-17-05, 01:59 PM   #12
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ur the herb aight yall jsut hate bitch^^^^^
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Old 07-17-05, 06:28 PM   #13
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How abotu instead of coming in here and jumping peoples nuts you drop a vote?

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Old 07-17-05, 06:36 PM   #14
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Propain:

Fucking dope man...Imagery was amazing, you did a fantastic job with this topic...Emotion was outstanding, you explained everything soo perfect and made me feel every sentence..Vocab was good, coulda been upped a tad, but overall, really nice verse man.

Pen N' Paper:

Good verse from you as well...You had the imagery, vocab, emotion, flow...Everything you needed, but you were just outdone on this battle dawg.

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Old 07-17-05, 11:40 PM   #15
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Aight 3-0, KO..good shit.
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