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Secrets. By Stanza
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Im Letting The Unknown Thoughts hender Me Living My Life In This Obscene world Of Secrecy Many Secrets Have Already been Revealed Many Have Not Yet To Be Out Spokenly Spilled People Have Secrets That Only God knows The Details People Tellin To Tell? Instead of the Fables We tell Secrets brings up The Question In Mind Like ..Does Kobe Bryant Have sex With Girls that Are White?.. ..Does Vin Deseal Really Play With Little Kids Toys ?.. ..Does Michael Jackson Really Fuck With Little Boys?.. ..Question Like Is Bill Cosby Going Against The Blacks?.. ..And Does The Government Give A Little & Take More Back?.. Yeah Those are some Serious Secrets Some Preknown Some Get Thought of & Debated About In The family Homes Stoppin Me Because My Secrets Are Scary Enough Ive Left innocent People Unfound Like Diamonds In The ruff No Matter How Young or How Old We Begin To Get We All Have Some Kind Of Deadly Unknown Secret Feed Will Be Returned :thumbup: |
..And Does The Government Give A Little & Take More Back?..
^yes they do this was nicely written....short and sweet...Duabs and I were goin to do a topical Battle about Secrets.... I liked how yu Brought forth that many times Questions survive off secrets...that was my favorite part of this..... keep writing RTF...."The Creation"...or "The World Is not Flat" |
ayo keep em come in homie!!!!!!!!im up against you in the punchline league!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!RTF mine...............called ATTENTION EMCEE'S!!!!!!!!!ur flow was good vocab and imagery!!!!!!!!!8
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201737
here the link!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 |
Drop a link foo!..or this will be closed
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liked this man, really good, flowed well, topic was very good and creative, a lil short, but it didn't have any effect on it, keep it up man..........and drop a link on this, don't want it to be closed, lol, good stuff
if you want to RTF links are in my sig, keep it up man |
Thanx Yall Ima RTF'z Now and I will drop a Link In A Few
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its good like the imagery and vocab is good structure and flow aight but tis pice dont show enuff of emotion in it but its still good......and the topic i felt u want good with the topic as well and how u ended it wit a suspense wit a deadly unknown secret its good really enjoyed reading this piece........
. . . . . . PLZ RTF WIT A HONEST VOTE IN MY BATTLES........ |
nope..........................lol................P lus i cant vote on none of yo battles bcuz im on They blacklist and stuff so
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ohhhhh aight then, then jus leave feed on my OM then made a new one go check it out
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202092 (can drop a line if you want to)
Try be brave corrupt and fiery but gave up entirely on Randon notes and abandon hope on becoming a rapper strong Rumbling through chapters wrong try find my page And a divine stage in my life I’m lost mind in rage |
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