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GET DA FUCK BACK....Omen,Acuity,Traidmarx,Enygma
Remember that open verse shit omen posted a while back well i mixed 2geva every1 who spat on it into 1 full track and added a verse maself :thumbup: ...but ye check it out :shoot: this been lieing about 4 a week/so now n i 4got to post it...POW
1-omen 2-acuity 3-traidmarx 4-enygma www.soundclick.com/acuityuk ^check some of the other shit while ya dere links 2 come |
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Soundclick actually works lol.. how lovely..
omen not bad ya flow was straight at the beginning, then it fell off a few times.. lyrics were pretty okay chorus is really good acuity ya flow was a lil' off in some spots, straight verse overall.. traidmarx you had the best mic presence, but your flow was iffy at parts.. enygma ya flow was pretty good on this... fell off one time.. i like how the chorus fades.. nice collab, not bad.. the quality levels weren't too much different from each other.. everybody had their shine moments.. props.. |
:(.....I could have used this as a personal....lol.
Anyway, good looking out.....shit sounds good all put together :thumbup:™ |
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lol..word... :thumbup: |
bump fools..........
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aight son, seeing as ur one of tha only cats who gives me feed ima def not miss this one, i like tha sample you added in tha begining, lol at u repeating the "automattic" aight im waitin 4 ur part comin up now, quality wasnt good at beginnin but now im used to it, voice is illla than usual but flow is a lil off compared to ur normal, dunno what u was really goin for on this one, i didnt sence much of a flow, but def a presence, i think thats ur strong point, only uk dude im feelin man, focus on that, but also go back to ur normal flow dude..
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Balls n Word clip...<-------I've used it many, many times
and I've heard this beat somewhere before...iono 1st cat...verse sounds familiar for some reason...nice flow...pretty decent quality hook sounds Em-ish...= not bad...but not all that catchy 2nd cat...U need to learn to mix and edit ur vocals better...they have this echoey/hallway sound to them...needs to be way crisper...delivery is better than ur flow here...but u came hard Hook: again, decent...In my opinion, hooks should be simple with repetitive lyrics to make em catchy 3rd cat...vocals could be crisper and louder...flow is good...lips sounds kinda soupy/juicy...watch dat...pretty decent verse Hook: once again...not terrible...But, after a person hears a hook, it should be stuck in their heads...that's why they call it a "HOOK"...urs wasn't stuck in my head 4th cat: vocals kinda muffled...flow is nice... solid drop 1 |
1st cat...verse sounds familiar for some reason...nice flow...pretty decent quality
^lol maybe cuz i've seen u drop feed for this track 3 times, cuz this is a track i made with the beat left open n everytime sum1 fills it in i see u leavin feed on it everytime lol i cant beleive u cant remember me q :( |
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The Beat - I actually have this beat myself. I like it alot. ____________________________ 1-omen Flow was kinda all over the place. Good presence and delivery just the flow was confsuing at some points 2-acuity No offense there thugsy. But sayin Jet's gotta ton of effect an then throwin that much echo in your peice is ball'zy. Flow was good. But way to much distort and effect put tords the verse hurt delivery and presence. 3-traidmarx Trade, you didn't have that bad of a presence here. But I think you lacked the delivery and emotion to really make this a good verse. Also you seem a lil too slow for this. 4-enygma The best on this track by far. You can understand everything nice and clear. The multie's and flow match well with your delivery. This is a beat basicly "made" for a person with your style. Now...All of YOU. Hit up my. "My Mind's Lost" - Thanks. |
^^dats wut Im sayin...i remembered the lyrics and the beat
why fool me dawg? |
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