Remember that open verse shit omen posted a while back well i mixed 2geva every1 who spat on it into 1 full track and added a verse maself ...but ye check it out this been lieing about 4 a week/so now n i 4got to post it...POW

1-omen
2-acuity
3-traidmarx
4-enygma

www.soundclick.com/acuityuk

^check some of the other shit while ya dere


links 2 come

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Soundclick actually works lol.. how lovely..

omen not bad ya flow was straight at the beginning, then it fell off a few times.. lyrics were pretty okay

chorus is really good

acuity ya flow was a lil' off in some spots, straight verse overall..

traidmarx you had the best mic presence, but your flow was iffy at parts..

enygma ya flow was pretty good on this... fell off one time..

i like how the chorus fades.. nice collab, not bad.. the quality levels weren't too much different from each other.. everybody had their shine moments.. props..

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.....I could have used this as a personal....lol.

Anyway, good looking out.....shit sounds good all put together ™

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lol..word...

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bump fools..........

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aight son, seeing as ur one of tha only cats who gives me feed ima def not miss this one, i like tha sample you added in tha begining, lol at u repeating the "automattic" aight im waitin 4 ur part comin up now, quality wasnt good at beginnin but now im used to it, voice is illla than usual but flow is a lil off compared to ur normal, dunno what u was really goin for on this one, i didnt sence much of a flow, but def a presence, i think thats ur strong point, only uk dude im feelin man, focus on that, but also go back to ur normal flow dude..

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best Audio Head May- the Omen*

OMEN ON MYSPACE

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Balls n Word clip...<-------I've used it many, many times


and I've heard this beat somewhere before...iono


1st cat...verse sounds familiar for some reason...nice flow...pretty decent quality


hook sounds Em-ish...= not bad...but not all that catchy


2nd cat...U need to learn to mix and edit ur vocals better...they have this echoey/hallway sound to them...needs to be way crisper...delivery is better than ur flow here...but u came hard



Hook: again, decent...In my opinion, hooks should be simple with repetitive lyrics to make em catchy


3rd cat...vocals could be crisper and louder...flow is good...lips sounds kinda soupy/juicy...watch dat...pretty decent verse


Hook: once again...not terrible...But, after a person hears a hook, it should be stuck in their heads...that's why they call it a "HOOK"...urs wasn't stuck in my head


4th cat: vocals kinda muffled...flow is nice...


solid drop


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1st cat...verse sounds familiar for some reason...nice flow...pretty decent quality

^lol maybe cuz i've seen u drop feed for this track 3 times, cuz this is a track i made with the beat left open n everytime sum1 fills it in i see u leavin feed on it everytime lol i cant beleive u cant remember me q

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OMEN ON MYSPACE

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Ok....
The Beat -
I actually have this beat myself. I like it alot.
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1-omen
Flow was kinda all over the place. Good presence and delivery just the flow was confsuing at some points
2-acuity
No offense there thugsy. But sayin Jet's gotta ton of effect an then throwin that much echo in your peice is ball'zy. Flow was good. But way to much distort and effect put tords the verse hurt delivery and presence.
3-traidmarx
Trade, you didn't have that bad of a presence here. But I think you lacked the delivery and emotion to really make this a good verse. Also you seem a lil too slow for this.
4-enygma
The best on this track by far. You can understand everything nice and clear. The multie's and flow match well with your delivery. This is a beat basicly "made" for a person with your style.


Now...All of YOU. Hit up my. "My Mind's Lost" - Thanks.

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