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All I Have
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the personification of both immortality and weakness that gets our message etched in stone but renders us speechless -life. the lord grants us this for our deliverance but some of us just waste our time abosorbing more ignorance -hope. the future, both life and death that thru faith permits us to believe there is something left to believe in' that makes some men go mad and abandon all reason the idea that one day, out this hell will be leavin' exchange this perpetual winter for a new season -my word of any virtue u might find in me the one that remains constant's my honesty -my balls u may call it valor or bravery but i call it balls to get this shit up off my chest and then recite it for y'all and if u want to hate on my shit, u don't like it at all 614-575-1337 be a man, nigga give me a call |
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Nice poem, heartfelt and some powerful words, i was feeling this alot man, lol @ "give me a call"..and posting the #..you might want to take that shit down, some freaks may call you..but yo, good poem, stay up..1..
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good lookin' on the feedback and advice. i think i'll leave my number on that though. i love when my fans get in touch with me.uppin for more feedback.
my link: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200501 my poems: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202821 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202397 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200947 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201395 |
uppin' for more feedback
my link: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200501 my poems: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202821 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202397 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200947 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201395 |
shit was dope....nice flow and vocab.....i liked the way u broke it down into parts as well...good imagery as well.....keep doing ur shit nigga.....8/10
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good lookin on the feedback and welcome to Trigga Town
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