Run Away With You ft Fate
Chorus
Baby I just wanna run away with you I'll do anything just to lay with you Take you by tha hand, walk tha bay with you Sneak into your bed just to play with you I just wanna spend everyday with you Baby I just wanna run away with you Black Queen We can get in tha ride, run away for maybe a day or two Cause there aint nothing I wouldn't do or say jus for you So won't you pack your bags cause we leavin' for a while I don't trust alota things but I'm believin' in your smile In a couple'a more years we might be weavin' down tha aisle But at the very moment...All I wanna be thievin' is your style And if your questioning my love I tell you I truly do love you You could be my knight in shining armor jus do the thangs you do You can hold my right hand as we navigating through tha streets And by tha time that I'm through you'll be swaying to this beat You and Me just gotta be tha very best type of combination We mean more to each other then tha entire population Now lets dissapear, go away, I say we hide in hibernation Cos I just want tha real you mah love, I expect no imitations So won't you run away cos tha suffocation is so clear We need some private time, no limitations I'll be here Chorus Fate i'm overcome with enticing emotions...if only i could get away with you somewhere distant for instance even if it's only for a day or two allurement draws me closer girl it's like i need to have my way with you when your around my mind disarrays i don't know what to say to you i'm left in a daze for you....i'd wait days for you; to run away with you you got a nigga goin crazy; point out a hater and i'll spray for you picture us....side by side like bonnie and clyde.....forever i'll ride our love never shall die, i promise to stay true to you for forever and i will never regret............ or for that matter ever forget gettin with you you just don't know how much it meant when u told me "i'm feelin u too" and niggas don't know...but right now i'm confirmin it's true nothin anybody can say or do will ever come between me and you and as we meet up in this secretive place, i can hardly wait to see your beautiful face; as we come nearer my heart begins to race then as we kiss i'm left amidst a feeling of passion growing from within as i leave i tell her how i feel........................then it all ends Chorus |
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I ain't no fan of love songs....but I'ma try to be as unbaised as I can The chrous was Ok.I was...w/e. The flow was good.A little better on Fate's side of it.I ain't feelin the basic rhyme scheme...but in a song like this...I guess it's an exception this time. Content...It was good..except for the fact that Fate's verse and BQ's were nearly identical.Both sayin...blah-blah..get away with you...blah-blah..I love you..blah-blah..forever love.....blah-blah.Bq's verse kept me awake because it came first...but Fate's verse was a repeat.I suggest the next time you collab..you agree on what you wanna rap about.SO you don't end up saying the same shit again. SOme lines don't make sence You could be my knight in shining armor jus do the thangs you do ^^wtf is this?....so he's your armor(meanin he be on top you :hump: )....if he did the things....or "thangs you do"?..seems to me you made this outta desperation...like you ain't know what the fuck you wanna say next.HE gotta do what you do to get in your pants? :huh: SO... Both of you have some talent there...but need to work on wording your shit better..and not repeating yourselves. Ooh....and try to be creative god damn it! All this.."i'll do the impossible to be with you" or "I'll kill whoever fucking with you"....is played like a mother fucker.BE CREATIVE. If you don't mind...as I took time to read this...vote in one my battles in sig please? |
ooh yeah.....you two make a cute couple :evilgrin:
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^^^wooooooooo....someone seeming pissed...LoL....they ain't on right now tho....
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n thx fo the feed NK
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yo chekd shit out...nice lil collabo here...yo BQ had the better verse IMO...fate u came ok...but BQ held it IMO...wud be a good audio
BQ - 8/10 Fate - 6/10 Good job...RTF in my open mic TAINTED SOUL: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203811 |
this piece was iight 8/10 over all liked it a lot rtf if u want
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it was ight assuming dat b.q came wit it on diz piece & seemed more up 4 it, den fate
cuz he did a half-azz job of writing a decent verse but overall it could have been alot betta wit b.q & anotha guy who is alot more lyrically up 2 par but b.q= 8.5/10; fate= 4/10 step ya game up next time ight rtf: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204043 |
I swear....ya'll forever on BQ's dick..or pussy...w/e.
Because Fate clearly had a better verse...I bet ya'll ain't even read the damn thing.Just cause BQ's more popular don't mean shit. |
n y are u gettin mad cus sum1 has dey opinion
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^^LOL....ite...sry....I'll stop... :kid:
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^^^This nigga gay ass hell yall both did good liked the concept of this right here hook was hot and so was the verses good job both of you!
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Dawg....either battle me...or hush up....and people who only leave one sentence postive feedback are d/r's who didn't even read the verse. Don't even front TG...you ain't read the verse...you internet gangsta :bored: Fuck off.... |
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