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Daubs vs Sin`cere
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6 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 08-16-05 at 11:31 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Sin`cere has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-05 11:33 AM.
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Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-05 12:09 PM.
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This kid actin like he hard man u kno u wack alone
Wonderin y this bitch is scared he hides behind tha phone Daubs? U painted ur picture wrong u mustve not had a lamp Cuz ur like Jews ill leave u in the fuckin “Concentration” camp And u kno u aint neva hot cuz u allergic of the sun witout a tan Cuz u playing soccer when u bring special deliveries like a pizzaman -------------------- EXPLANATIONS.... 1st bar- he thinks he good but he took a picture wit his phone in the way click the link....lol....what an idiot 2nd bar- Daubs if u look up in a dictionary for what a daubs is this is what it is...... Quote:
and if u see that he didnt paint it right he needed concentration and the rest is simple..... 3rd bar- He say that he white so he allergic of being hot so no tan and he plays soccer if u click the link again u see that he gots a jersey....and also the special delivery is like a pizzaman who is retarded....get...it....lol.... ok if u dont undastand them then plz dont vote..... and all honest votes will be returned if wanted...... g/l...daubs..... |
Kinda quick.
I been here almost twice as long, and still got less posts than you.. But still your skills got more tacky edges..............than posters do.. And sins-here.........nor there, he just aint sure about his sexuality.. Just watch me take his spinal chord...and snap him back into reality.. This is a two man race, and you wouldnt be ahead..by biting your cock.. I see your interests are writing,me too,look...........im writing you off.. Basic, dont get anything..dont vote. True personals. Should be enough. i will rtf on honest votes. |
Voted For: Daubs
>This kid actin like he hard man u kno u wack alone Wonderin y this bitch is scared he hides behind tha phone meh, nothing creative 4/10 >Daubs? U painted ur picture wrong u mustve not had a lamp Cuz ur like Jews ill leave u in the fuckin “Concentration” camp uhhmm, if you need that much explanation for a punch, its not effective...2/10 >And u kno u aint neva hot cuz u allergic of the sun witout a tan Cuz u playing soccer when u bring special deliveries like a pizzaman nothing special 4/10 overall: 10/30....nothing creative in here man, you kinda just took his pic, but you kinda just stated the obvious....and that 2nd bar was just stupid, it was okay.....but tried to hard with it man....uhmm, advice? come up with better/more witty concepts.....cause that verse was just basic at best.....no hate yo. >I been here almost twice as long, and still got less posts than you.. But still your skills got more tacky edges..............than posters do.. i actually like this punch, made me laugh 6/10 >And sins-here.........nor there, he just aint sure about his sexuality.. Just watch me take his spinal chord...and snap him back into reality.. set up was meh, okay punch 4/10 >This is a two man race, and you wouldnt be ahead..by biting your cock.. I see your interests are writing,me too,look...........im writing you off.. not bad, enjoyed it 5/10 overall: 15/30......not bad, had the right ideas with punches, first bar was good, creative, original......last two, concepts have been done before, but still, not bad, wording was good, creative.....flowed nice........not too bad of a battle here, but daubs defined the win here.......and no hate, honest vote.........keep up to both v/daubs |
Voted For: Sin`cere
SIn jsut came more personal with punches and I liked his flow more, u shouldnt use pauses all the time but ur punches were pretty weak anyway Daubs. V/ Sin for harder and funnier punches with an easier flow as well....please vote back on the links in my sig Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Daubs
nice battle............................................ ......
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aight thnx for voting yall ill RTF 2morrow aight thnx yall for voting and thnx for the feed drakel ill try to improve on that.....and thnx for the v/ rile1 ill RTF honestly 2morrow....uppin this for more votes.....
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This was feedback posted for Daubs
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This was feedback posted for Sin`cere
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Voted For: Daubs
Daubs just over powered Sin Here... hard hitting punches... daubs just controlled it.. i dont know how to explain more.. i mean the flow and struc was on for both.. just punches gave it to daubs |
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