Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-16-05 at 11:31 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Sin`cere has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-05 11:33 AM.

Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-05 12:09 PM.

This kid actin like he hard man u kno u wack alone
Wonderin y this bitch is scared he hides behind tha phone
Daubs? U painted ur picture wrong u mustve not had a lamp
Cuz ur like Jews ill leave u in the fuckin “Concentration” camp
And u kno u aint neva hot cuz u allergic of the sun witout a tan
Cuz u playing soccer when u bring special deliveries like a pizzaman

--------------------

EXPLANATIONS....
1st bar- he thinks he good but he took a picture wit his phone in the way click the link....lol....what an idiot
2nd bar- Daubs if u look up in a dictionary for what a daubs is this is what it is......



and if u see that he didnt paint it right he needed concentration and the rest is simple.....

3rd bar- He say that he white so he allergic of being hot so no tan and he plays soccer if u click the link again u see that he gots a jersey....and also the special delivery is like a pizzaman who is retarded....get...it....lol....

ok if u dont undastand them then plz dont vote.....

and all honest votes will be returned if wanted......

g/l...daubs.....

__________________


[CENTER]

Kinda quick.

I been here almost twice as long, and still got less posts than you..
But still your skills got more tacky edges..............than posters do..
And sins-here.........nor there, he just aint sure about his sexuality..
Just watch me take his spinal chord...and snap him back into reality..
This is a two man race, and you wouldnt be ahead..by biting your cock..
I see your interests are writing,me too,look...........im writing you off..


Basic, dont get anything..dont vote.

True personals.

Should be enough.

i will rtf on honest votes.

__________________

Daubs MySpace

Voted For: Daubs

>This kid actin like he hard man u kno u wack alone
Wonderin y this bitch is scared he hides behind tha phone
meh, nothing creative 4/10
>Daubs? U painted ur picture wrong u mustve not had a lamp
Cuz ur like Jews ill leave u in the fuckin “Concentration” camp
uhhmm, if you need that much explanation for a punch, its not effective...2/10
>And u kno u aint neva hot cuz u allergic of the sun witout a tan
Cuz u playing soccer when u bring special deliveries like a pizzaman
nothing special 4/10

overall: 10/30....nothing creative in here man, you kinda just took his pic, but you kinda just stated the obvious....and that 2nd bar was just stupid, it was okay.....but tried to hard with it man....uhmm, advice? come up with better/more witty concepts.....cause that verse was just basic at best.....no hate yo.

>I been here almost twice as long, and still got less posts than you..
But still your skills got more tacky edges..............than posters do..
i actually like this punch, made me laugh 6/10
>And sins-here.........nor there, he just aint sure about his sexuality..
Just watch me take his spinal chord...and snap him back into reality..
set up was meh, okay punch 4/10
>This is a two man race, and you wouldnt be ahead..by biting your cock..
I see your interests are writing,me too,look...........im writing you off..
not bad, enjoyed it 5/10

overall: 15/30......not bad, had the right ideas with punches, first bar was good, creative, original......last two, concepts have been done before, but still, not bad, wording was good, creative.....flowed nice........not too bad of a battle here, but daubs defined the win here.......and no hate, honest vote.........keep up to both

v/daubs

__________________

Voted For: Sin`cere

SIn jsut came more personal with punches and I liked his flow more, u shouldnt use pauses all the time but ur punches were pretty weak anyway Daubs. V/ Sin for harder and funnier punches with an easier flow as well....please vote back on the links in my sig

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

__________________
When i vote on urs vote on mine
Me vs. Opt1k(topical..50/vote)
I do this to herbs>>

nice battle............................................ ......

lmfao............................................. ..........

__________________

Daubs MySpace

aight thnx for voting yall ill RTF 2morrow aight thnx yall for voting and thnx for the feed drakel ill try to improve on that.....and thnx for the v/ rile1 ill RTF honestly 2morrow....uppin this for more votes.....

__________________


[CENTER]

ppppppppoooooooooooollllllllllllllssssssssssssssss s

pollzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

up................................up..............

__________________


[CENTER]

Voted For: Daubs

Daubs just over powered Sin Here... hard hitting punches... daubs just controlled it.. i dont know how to explain more.. i mean the flow and struc was on for both.. just punches gave it to daubs

__________________

My Lines Are ILL yo