Take A Ride ((Very Emotional Joint))
 

for me it is at least. .. this was done with my wife and it means a lot to me yo. Very deep for me to speak on but I push it out. Imagine being in a booth with the love of your life right there with you feeling every word that's coming outta your mouth. Can only be described in one word.. BEAUTIFUL. Check it


www.soundclick.com/jaeg

first track

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204352

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204433

damn no feed...i aint gonna leave u hangin son...

beat is ok..chorus is meh...

vocals is a lil low..flow is straight..i think it woulda had a way betta feel if u just woulda talked regular..the lyrics is ok..a lil hard to hear..the chorus again..needs work..second verse..flow is still good..

overall work on the chorus...

werd thnx fam - i appreciate the advice

u know what Imma sya bout dat quality...

if u follow my suggestions dawg, it'll come up instantly

and trust me, you DON'T sound like a robot when u do that technique

Do it man...I'm tellin u


beat is kinda reflective...I liked it


ur flow is good on it


but it was hard to hear u in spots...amp it some


I think the hook wudda been betta had u rapped over it with the singing


is dat ya girl on it?


not a bad joint dawg


RTF

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204656


Holla


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