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08-17-05, 03:30 AM
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Take A Ride ((Very Emotional Joint))
IP: F041 57B1
for me it is at least. .. this was done with my wife and it means a lot to me yo. Very deep for me to speak on but I push it out. Imagine being in a booth with the love of your life right there with you feeling every word that's coming outta your mouth. Can only be described in one word.. BEAUTIFUL. Check it
www.soundclick.com/jaeg first track http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204352 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204433 |
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08-17-05, 06:50 AM
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IP: 3B43 EB4A
damn no feed...i aint gonna leave u hangin son...
beat is ok..chorus is meh... vocals is a lil low..flow is straight..i think it woulda had a way betta feel if u just woulda talked regular..the lyrics is ok..a lil hard to hear..the chorus again..needs work..second verse..flow is still good.. overall work on the chorus...
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08-17-05, 11:01 AM
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IP: F041 57B1
werd thnx fam - i appreciate the advice
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08-17-05, 01:26 PM
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OYD
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IP: 1ADC A69C
u know what Imma sya bout dat quality...
if u follow my suggestions dawg, it'll come up instantly and trust me, you DON'T sound like a robot when u do that technique Do it man...I'm tellin u beat is kinda reflective...I liked it ur flow is good on it but it was hard to hear u in spots...amp it some I think the hook wudda been betta had u rapped over it with the singing is dat ya girl on it? not a bad joint dawg RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204656 Holla 1 |
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