Sunshine
 

Good story track, lyrical content is strong..nice beat in the background..your vocals are strong,nice flow and delivery, good emotion in your voice too..not bad at all, you got a different style,keep dropping.1

yea, peepin'.

Beat nice, yo. lmao @ "c'mon walk wit me" ;) lol nice shit... lyrics are dope so far. Good flow and shit yo. So far nice. Likin' the story. Shit is dope man. Really, can't say too much. I mean prolly best shit you dropped that I peeped. Really liked it. You gotta finish that calm down shit, or let me get on a verse of it. :)

i mean its a nice lyrical story

but i thought ur flow was off on this one,
and alot of your lines were too wordy

Im feelin this man, this is good shit. I like the story line, good lyrical shit. Its iight man nothin I would listen to ova and ova but its a decent track tho man. The beat im fuckin with too man. You kno what you doin man keep it up. Ya flow was iight too.

Can you leave some feed on this
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205666

aiiiight... First track I peeped of yours. aiiight - nice beat, quality is so-so, but meh - thats whatever. Lyrics are good - fav line: "He doesn't understand the complexity of this currency/ His motto 'In God we Trust', and he's reppin it currently" <-- hot bar. Good story - good to hear a track like this. Flow was aight, but you need to run through it a few more times to get hella comfortable on the beat homie. Good drop - keep at it. word.

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i like the beat, the fact that my comp keeps freezin is fucked, your lyrics is pretty good, nice voice, good flow, some lines you kinda rushed and messed the flow up but i see you rushed them to keep it flowin lol, not bad emotion, quality isn't to bad but overall this isn't that bad of a track your elevatin fast man, good job

rtf on me n tizzles collab "rich girls"

I liek the Concept you brought to the table with this track, The Emotion you put into it was dope, Overall Delivery is dope as hell, Yah flow, Lyrics were dope.. lol.. Overall dope track.. Keep at it..

Please return some Constructive Feed on the SOng in my Sig

"he's holdin 2 grams of coke and a handfull of valiums"-- thats where I started gettin a little impressed-- your delivery isn't great yet, but it really improved, you pronounce your words well, just put more intonation in your voice when you spit, so you don't sound like your just speaking- it sounded like you had the verse memorized well, just put it out a little weak... i like the song though, good material... peesh

lol that voice..lol..get some ass or sumthin =\..sike nah..

i like the vibe of the beat..flow is ok kinda choppy..i like the multis, but sometimes u had to rush ya flow not to go over the snare kick..lyrics is ok i could fuck wit this..second verse..flow is betta didnt hear as many rushes in the second verse..i like this..just up ya quality tho ckuz it would be betta wit some clear quality ckuz then somebody could bump it in a car witout static and all..

apreciate tha feed upp.........

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ok your quality is alot better....flow is cool so far.....nice beat...good sample in it....ok your delivery is blan as hell here....u need to animate your voice more...in second verse I'm hearing you rushing a few lines.....the story was solid....it developed nicely.....def a step up for you lyrically....jus your delivery was bad...aside from that this was a solid drop....keep up the good work....1

your quality got better....story was gud i liked it....emotion ehhh you sound monotone.....beat is aight overall id say 8/10 keep up the gud work yo